Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and somewhat repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying "I sing literally all the time" and then explaining the karaoke game, you could combine these ideas more effectively.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve stress. For instance, I often sing karaoke at home with my siblings, and we enjoy competing to see who remembers the lyrics better.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have tried to learn singing many times. For example, I often record myself on my phone to evaluate my tone and improve. Additionally, I pay attention to song lyrics to find meanings that relate to my life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and somewhat unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide a complete thought. Also, try to be more specific and concise, and use linking words to organize your ideas.

Ví dụ: Currently, I don't have anyone in mind to sing for. However, in the future, I would like to sing for someone special who is close to my heart and whom I cherish deeply.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Make sure to complete your sentences and organize your ideas logically using linking words. Also, avoid vague statements and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I believe singing brings happiness to many people, including myself. When I sing songs that I can relate to, it helps me feel relieved from my problems. Although some songs may be boring, overall, singing is a joyful activity.

× I sing literally all the time, especially when I'm at home with my siblings and we try to play a karaoke then follow it singing the lyrics to try to see who sings better, who gets the lyrics better.

✓ I sing literally all the time, especially when I'm at home with my siblings and we try to play karaoke then follow it by singing the lyrics to see who sings better, who knows the lyrics better.

The phrase 'follow it singing the lyrics' is incorrect because 'follow' should be followed by a preposition 'by' when indicating the action that follows. Also, 'a karaoke' is incorrect because 'karaoke' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. The corrected sentence uses 'follow it by singing' and removes the article before 'karaoke' to improve grammatical accuracy.

× I sing literally all the time, especially when I'm at home with my siblings and we try to play a karaoke then follow it singing the lyrics to try to see who sings better, who gets the lyrics better.

✓ I sing literally all the time, especially when I'm at home with my siblings and we try to play karaoke then follow it by singing the lyrics to see who sings better, who knows the lyrics better.

The phrase 'who gets the lyrics better' is incorrect because 'get' is not the appropriate verb here. The correct verb is 'know' when referring to familiarity with lyrics. Also, 'better' is used correctly as a comparative adverb. Changing 'gets' to 'knows' corrects the meaning and usage.

× Obviously so many times I always like use my phone record myself to see how well I can sing and to listen to the tone I used to sing.

✓ Obviously, so many times I always like to use my phone to record myself to see how well I can sing and to listen to the tone I use to sing.

The phrase 'like use' is incorrect; the verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to use' in this context. Also, 'record myself' needs the preposition 'to' before 'record'. Additionally, 'used to sing' implies past habit, but the context suggests present habit, so 'use' is correct.

× And I always watch musics, especially their lyrics to get the information from it if maybe it can be relating to my life or something so.

✓ And I always watch music videos, especially their lyrics, to get information from them if maybe they relate to my life or something.

The word 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'get the information from it' is awkward; 'get information from them' is better since 'music videos' is plural. 'Relating' should be 'relate' to match the subject 'they'.

× For now, I don't think there is anybody I would love to sing for.

✓ For now, I don't think there is anybody I would love to sing for.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× And I feel like I really.

✓ And I feel like I really do.

The sentence 'And I feel like I really.' is incomplete and lacks a main verb or complement. Adding 'do' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I love singing a lot and each time I sing I feel relief of every problem issue that I'm facing especially when I can relate to the song.

✓ I love singing a lot and each time I sing I feel relief from every problem or issue that I'm facing, especially when I can relate to the song.

The phrase 'relief of every problem issue' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'relief from'. Also, 'problem issue' is redundant; 'problem or issue' is clearer. Adding commas improves readability.