Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且有些句子结构混乱。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy singing because I don't think I have much talent for it. Whenever I try, my voice sounds bad, which makes me feel embarrassed. Therefore, I rarely sing in front of others.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“make my son better”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达学习经历和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I took some singing classes after school when I was in primary school to improve my skills. However, I found it difficult to sing loudly and eventually gave up because I felt discouraged.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次使用“think”表达不当，且句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用恰当的词汇表达不自信和独自唱歌的原因。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't like singing in front of others because I'm not confident in my singing skills. I usually sing alone, which helps me relax.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，部分表达不自然。建议使用更连贯的句子和准确的词汇来描述情景和感受。

Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness. For example, at concerts with thousands of people, everyone cheers loudly and enjoys the music together. This creates a joyful and comfortable atmosphere for all.

× my terrible sound voice usually push me in an embarrassed situation and makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ my terrible sounding voice usually pushes me into an embarrassing situation and makes me feel uncomfortable.

这里'sound voice'应为'sounding voice'，表示发声的状态；'push'应与主语'sound voice'保持单数一致，改为'pushes'；'in an embarrassed situation'应改为'into an embarrassing situation'，表示进入某种状态。

× my terrible sound voice usually push me in an embarrassed situation and makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ my terrible sounding voice usually pushes me into an embarrassing situation and makes me feel uncomfortable.

介词'in'用法错误，应该用'into'表示进入某种状态。

× So as a result I seldom think in front of others.

✓ So as a result, I seldom sing in front of others.

原句中'seldom think'用词错误，应为'seldom sing'，因为上下文讲的是唱歌。

× So as a result I seldom think in front of others.

✓ So as a result, I seldom sing in front of others.

'in front of others'用法正确，但句中缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更通顺。

× I took some after school scene courses in order to improve my singing skills and make my son better.

✓ I took some after-school scene courses in order to improve my singing skills and make my singing better.

'make my son better'语义错误，应为'make my singing better'，表示提高唱歌水平。

× But after for a while I felt discouraged and gave up eventually because it's hard for me to sing in a strong voice.

✓ But after a while, I felt discouraged and gave up eventually because it's hard for me to sing with a strong voice.

'after for a while'错误，应为'after a while'；'sing in a strong voice'应改为'sing with a strong voice'，表示用强有力的声音唱歌。

× Well, to be honest, I really think in front of others because I'm not confident about my thin skills and worry about people who listen to my song will not enjoy it very well.

✓ Well, to be honest, I really don't like singing in front of others because I'm not confident about my singing skills and worry that people who listen to my songs will not enjoy them very much.

'think in front of others'错误，应为'don't like singing in front of others'；'thin skills'应为'singing skills'；'people who listen to my song will not enjoy it very well'语法和表达不当，改为'worry that people who listen to my songs will not enjoy them very much'。

× Well, to be honest, I really think in front of others because I'm not confident about my thin skills and worry about people who listen to my song will not enjoy it very well.

✓ Well, to be honest, I really don't like singing in front of others because I'm not confident about my singing skills and worry that people who listen to my songs will not enjoy them very much.

'worry about people who listen to my song will not enjoy it very well'中'worry about'后接从句应使用'worry that'，且'song'应为复数'songs'，'it'应改为'them'。

× As a result, I always think when I was alone, which sometimes helps me relax.

✓ As a result, I always sing when I am alone, which sometimes helps me relax.

'think'用词错误，应为'sing'；'when I was alone'时态不一致，应为'when I am alone'。

× It's obvious that when you enter the concert with thousands of people get together, you can see that everyone cheers loudly and things followed by the singer.

✓ It's obvious that when you enter a concert where thousands of people get together, you can see that everyone cheers loudly and things are followed by the singer.

'enter the concert with thousands of people get together'结构混乱，应改为'enter a concert where thousands of people get together'；'things followed by the singer'缺少被动语态助动词，应为'things are followed by the singer'。

× It really creates a comfortable atmosphere and everyone is pleasant during this time.

✓ It really creates a comfortable atmosphere and everyone feels pleasant during this time.

'everyone is pleasant'表达不自然，应为'everyone feels pleasant'，表示每个人感到愉快。