Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや意味の不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「They enjoy recipe, hot song and everyone dancing together」は意味が通じにくいので、正確な表現に直しましょう。また、文を簡潔にし、5文以内にまとめることを意識してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it is a fun activity to do with friends. We often go to karaoke and enjoy singing popular songs together. Everyone dances and has a great time, which makes the experience very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、「sense of listen」は不自然な表現です。正しくは「sense of listening」や「listening skills」などです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

Ví dụ: I have never formally learned how to sing, but I often try to imitate popular artists because I enjoy their music. Moreover, singing alone helps me relax and improve my listening skills.

Gợi ý: 質問が理解できなかった場合でも、できるだけ答えようとする姿勢が大切です。例えば、質問の意味を確認したり、自分の考えを簡単に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I'm sorry, could you please repeat the question? If you mean who I want to sing for, I would like to sing for my family because they support me a lot.

Gợi ý: 文法ミス（"I sing singing can bling"）があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい文法を使い、具体的な理由や例を明確に述べることが重要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it has a powerful emotional effect. For example, when I feel cheerful, I often sing my favorite songs to express my feelings.

× They enjoy recipe, hot song and everyone dancing together.

✓ They enjoy the recipes, hot songs, and everyone dancing together.

'Recipe' and 'hot song' are countable nouns and should be pluralized when referring to multiple items. Also, articles like 'the' are needed before plural nouns when referring to specific items. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I often try to imitate popular artists because I enjoy their music.

✓ I often try to imitate popular artists because I enjoy their music.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Singing alone helps me relax and improve my sense of listen.

✓ Singing alone helps me relax and improve my sense of listening.

The noun 'listen' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form 'listening' should be used after 'sense of' to indicate the ability or faculty.

× I sing singing can bling happiness to people because it has a powerful effect on people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because it has a powerful effect on them.

The original sentence has redundancy and a typo ('bling' instead of 'bring'). Also, 'I sing singing' is incorrect; 'I think singing' is appropriate to express opinion. 'People' is repeated unnecessarily; 'them' is better for variety and clarity.