Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误，如“when I was singing”应为“when I sing”。建议简化句子，避免重复表达“pressure”，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially pop music, because it helps me relieve stress and express my feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，如“my mother get me to hobby class”应为“my mother took me to a singing class”。建议练习流利表达，减少填充词，使用正确时态和词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was eight or nine, my mother took me to a singing class where the teacher played the piano and helped me learn songs.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有重复。建议直接回答问题，明确表达自己的想法，避免使用无意义的填充词。

Ví dụ: I prefer to sing for myself because I enjoy it personally and don't usually perform for others.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意语法正确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing or listening to beautiful songs can help people feel better and motivated, especially when they are feeling down, as music allows them to express their emotions.

× I think when I was singing I can relieve my pressure and speak out the pressure.

✓ I think when I am singing I can relieve my pressure and speak out the pressure.

这里时态不一致，前半句用的是一般现在时态，后半句用的是过去进行时，应该保持时态一致，使用一般现在时。

× my mother get me to uh, hobby class

✓ my mother got me to uh, hobby class

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式，get的过去式是got。

× the teacher teach me how to sing so well

✓ the teacher taught me how to sing so well

描述过去的动作，teach的过去式是taught，需使用过去式。

× My teacher just, uh, stay beside me and play the piano

✓ My teacher just, uh, stayed beside me and played the piano

描述过去的动作，stay和play应使用过去式，分别是stayed和played。

× just following the bit and sing the songs

✓ just follow the beat and sing the songs

这里“bit”应为“beat”，表示节拍，且动词形式应保持一致，使用原形动词follow。

× I just want to sing for myself because, umm, because I'm not a big fan. I'm not a person that uh, uh, would like to sing for others.

✓ I just want to sing for myself because, umm, I'm not a big fan. I'm not a person who would like to sing for others.

关系代词使用错误，应该用who指代人，而不是that。

× I think the others can. We can.

✓ I think others can. We can too.

“the others”用法不当，应该用“others”，且句子不完整，补充“too”使句子完整。

× just listening the lovely song that can help them get better and motivate them

✓ just listening to the lovely songs that can help them get better and motivate them

动词listen后应接介词to，且song应为复数songs，表示泛指多首歌曲。