Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Та илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I enjoy singing because it relaxes me and helps me concentrate better. I often sing while doing chores like cleaning." гэж хэлж болно.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it relaxes me and helps me concentrate better. I often sing while doing chores like cleaning.

Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I practice by following song lyrics when I listen, which helps me improve." гэж хэлж болно.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I practice by following song lyrics when I listen, which helps me improve.

Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү цэгцтэй, ойлгомжтой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I want to sing a song for my girlfriend's birthday this month. I'm practicing every day to make it special." гэж хэлж болно.

Ví dụ: I want to sing a song for my girlfriend's birthday this month. I'm practicing every day to make it special.

Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, утга агуулгатай болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. When I sing, I feel very joyful and relaxed." гэж хэлж болно.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. When I sing, I feel very joyful and relaxed.

× Of course I like because singing is my favorite hobby and it can energize me and stimulate my brain and I think it helps me to focus on things more casually.

✓ Of course I like it because singing is my favorite hobby and it can energize me and stimulate my brain and I think it helps me to focus on things more easily.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'I like'. Also, 'more casually' is incorrect in this context; the correct adverb is 'more easily' to express improved focus. 'Casually' means relaxed or informal, which does not fit the intended meaning.

× And I like singing when I singing when I'm doing something or cleaning.

✓ And I like singing when I'm doing something or cleaning.

The phrase 'when I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I'm singing' or omitted if redundant. Here, removing the repeated phrase clarifies the sentence and corrects the verb form.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense form; 'learned' is the American English equivalent. Both are correct, but consistency is important. Since the rest of the transcript uses American English spelling, 'learned' is preferred.

× For now, no, but I usually try to follow the lyrics of the songs when I listen listen, so I think it can help me more to sing more professionally.

✓ For now, no, but I usually try to follow the lyrics of the songs when I listen, so I think it can help me sing more professionally.

The repeated word 'listen' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'listen'. Also, 'help me more to sing' is awkward; the correct structure is 'help me sing more professionally' without 'to'.

× I want to sing for my girlfriend for her birthday this month, so I'm preparing that song. Happy birthday.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend for her birthday this month, so I'm preparing a song called 'Happy Birthday'.

'That song. Happy birthday.' is unclear. It should specify the song's name properly. Also, 'that song' is vague; 'a song called' is clearer.

× It's gonna be very amazing. I think I practice every day.

✓ It's going to be amazing. I think I practice every day.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'very amazing' is redundant; 'amazing' alone suffices.

× Yeah. Do some. Fascinating.

✓ Yeah. It's fascinating.

The original sentence fragments 'Do some. Fascinating.' are incomplete and unclear. Correcting to 'It's fascinating.' forms a complete and meaningful sentence.

× As I'm concerned singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, singing can bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'As I'm concerned' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'As far as I'm concerned'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase.

× For me, when I'm saying I'm very delighted, I can't describe this.

✓ For me, when I sing, I'm very delighted; I can't describe it.

'When I'm saying' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'when I sing'. Also, 'I can't describe this' should be 'I can't describe it' for clarity.

× I usually sing like stars so.

✓ I usually sing like a star.

The phrase 'sing like stars so' is incomplete and unclear. Correcting to 'sing like a star' makes the simile clear and grammatically correct.