Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“crazy about saying”应为“crazy about singing”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免多余的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and release stress, especially when I am taking a shower.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“Without study burden”不符合语境。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

Ví dụ: Actually, I have never taken singing lessons because I was busy with my studies, and now I don't have enough free time to learn.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了感激之情，但句子结构有误，如主谓不一致。建议使用正确的语法结构，并适当丰富细节。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my mother and my teacher because they supported me a lot during my school days, and I am very grateful to them.

Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且表达不够自然。建议使用准确词汇，并用简单明了的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can make people feel happy and improve their mood, so it helps us enjoy life more.

× I'm crazy about saying, for example, I think every time I take a shower, and that's because singing is a good way to release pressure maybe.

✓ I'm crazy about singing, for example, I think every time I take a shower, and that's because singing is a good way to release pressure maybe.

动词短语中，'crazy about'后面应接动名词形式，'saying'应改为'singing'，因为句意是喜欢唱歌。

× Truth be told, I haven't learned about how to sing songs because I was a student years ago and now I can't have time to learn how to sing. Without study burden.

✓ Truth be told, I haven't learned how to sing songs because I was a student years ago and now I don't have time to learn how to sing without study burden.

句中'can't have time'用法错误，应为'don't have time'表示现在没有时间。'Without study burden'应与前句连贯，放在句尾作为状语。

× The grateful people I want to sing for is my mother and my teacher because they help me a lot during my school days.

✓ The grateful people I want to sing for are my mother and my teacher because they help me a lot during my school days.

主语是复数'the grateful people'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。

× As a matter of fact, it is true that seeing can bring upright feelings and give people emotional value.

✓ As a matter of fact, it is true that singing can bring uplifting feelings and give people emotional value.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且形容词'upright'用错，正确应为'uplifting'表示令人振奋的感觉。