Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法和表达错误，如“Seeing my favorite songs always leaves me, leaves my mood”不通顺。建议简化表达，避免重复和语法错误，保持句子简洁且连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm taking a shower. It helps me relax and relieve stress. Singing my favorite songs always lifts my mood and makes me feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，但最后一句表达不够准确，语法有误。建议注意时态和语法，表达更准确自然。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned to sing formally. I usually just sing along with my favorite songs for fun. Singing is more of a hobby for me than a skill I have practiced seriously.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但最后一句不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，确保表达完整且连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy the moment. However, sometimes I go to KTV with my friends and sing for them, which makes the experience more fun and social. Singing in front of others also boosts my confidence and helps me connect with people.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，注意语法和逻辑，确保回答直接且具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing, I feel free, relaxed, and happy. Music has the power to improve our mood and bring joy.

× Seeing my favorite songs always leaves me, leaves my mood and makes me feel amazing.

✓ Seeing my favorite songs always lifts my mood and makes me feel amazing.

原句中“leaves my mood”用词不当，应该用“lifts my mood”表示“提升我的心情”。“leaves me”后面缺少宾语，导致句子不完整。建议使用正确的动词短语表达情绪变化。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

“learnt”和“learned”都是“learn”的过去分词，但在美式英语中更常用“learned”。根据上下文，建议统一使用“learned”。

× I haven't learned how to sing formally.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing formally.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Singing is more of a hobby for me rather than a skill I have practice seriously.

✓ Singing is more of a hobby for me rather than a skill I have practiced seriously.

“practice”应使用过去分词“practiced”来构成完成时态，表示“我认真练习过”。

× Staying in front of others also boosts my confidence and allows me to connect with.

✓ Staying in front of others also boosts my confidence and allows me to connect with them.

句末缺少宾语“them”，导致句子不完整。需要加上宾语代词以明确连接对象。

× Yes, that's absolutely when I'm seeing I'll feel freedom, relaxing and happy.

✓ Yes, that's absolutely true. When I sing, I feel free, relaxed, and happy.

原句结构混乱，语义不清。应拆分为两句，使用正确的时态和形容词形式表达感受。

× Sometimes when we listen to some music, we will.

✓ Sometimes when we listen to some music, we feel happy.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分。需要补充完整的谓语以表达完整意思。