Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely. I very like singing and I can consider myself a singer because I think my sing my voice quite sweet.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Let me think. I don't know because I don't learn to sing. When I was a child, my father often sang with me. And yes, it's my childhood.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I think I want to sing for everyone and it's special. My family's they are always supporting me to my hobbies and I've ever want to sing for there.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely. I think singing is play an important with their life. It can bring happiness to people. It can have they are relaxed after a long day tired.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý thích hát và lý do một cách rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi sai về ngữ pháp.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I think my voice sounds quite sweet, and I even consider myself a singer.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "Let me think". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but when I was a child, my father often sang with me, which was a special part of my childhood.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và liên kết ý tốt hơn. Hãy nói rõ bạn muốn hát cho ai và lý do tại sao.
Ví dụ: I want to sing for everyone because singing is special to me. My family always supports my hobbies, and I especially want to sing for them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Nên giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc hát.
Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I think singing plays an important role in people's lives because it can bring happiness and help them relax after a long, tiring day.
× I very like singing and I can consider myself a singer because I think my sing my voice quite sweet.
✓ I really like singing and I can consider myself a singer because I think my singing voice is quite sweet.
The phrase 'very like' is incorrect; 'really like' is the correct adverb usage. Also, 'my sing my voice' is incorrect; it should be 'my singing voice' because 'singing' is the gerund form acting as a noun here.
× I don't know because I don't learn to sing.
✓ I don't know because I haven't learned to sing.
The present perfect tense 'haven't learned' is appropriate here to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. 'Don't learn' is incorrect in this context.
× And yes, it's my childhood.
✓ And yes, that was during my childhood.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that was during' clarifies the time reference and improves sentence structure.
× My family's they are always supporting me to my hobbies and I've ever want to sing for there.
✓ My family is always supporting me in my hobbies and I have always wanted to sing for them.
'My family's they' is redundant; 'My family is' is correct. 'Supporting me to my hobbies' should be 'supporting me in my hobbies'. 'I've ever want' is incorrect; 'I have always wanted' is correct. 'Sing for there' should be 'sing for them'.
× I think singing is play an important with their life.
✓ I think singing plays an important role in their lives.
The verb 'play' needs to be in third person singular 'plays'. The phrase 'an important' is incomplete; it should be 'an important role'. The preposition 'with' is incorrect; 'in' is correct. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'their'.
× It can have they are relaxed after a long day tired.
✓ It can help them relax after a long, tiring day.
'Have they are relaxed' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'help them relax'. Also, 'a long day tired' should be 'a long, tiring day' to properly describe the day.