Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和拼写错误，如"relieve suggest"应为"relieve stress"。句子结构应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。可以增加具体细节说明为什么唱歌能缓解压力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. I often sing with my friends, which strengthens our friendship and makes me feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，应注意时态和句子完整性。可以更清楚地表达自己没有专业学习过唱歌，只是作为兴趣爱好。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons. I just enjoy singing casually with my friends as a hobby.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了感情，但语法和用词有误，如"she's very love me"应为"she loves me very much"。建议使用更准确的表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother because she loves me very much and always cares for me. She is very important in my life, and I want to show my love and appreciation through singing.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误，如"fabric of singing"和"relieve your suggest"，应为"act of singing"和"relieve your stress"。句子结构不完整，建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. When you sing, you feel joyful and it helps relieve stress, which is very important for our well-being.

× I enjoy singing with my friends, it can make connection with my friends and singing always help me to relieve suggest and it is very great way.

✓ I enjoy singing with my friends; it can make connections with my friends, and singing always helps me to relieve stress. It is a very great way.

句中'singing always help'中的动词help应与主语singing保持单数形式，故改为helps；'make connection'应为复数connections；'relieve suggest'中的'suggest'应为'stress'，表示缓解压力。句子中逗号应改为分号或句号以避免逗号拼接错误。

× I think learn how to sing is very professional and I just as a thing is my hobby.

✓ I think learning how to sing is very professional, and I just see it as a hobby.

'learn'应改为动名词形式'learning'，表示动作的过程；'I just as a thing is my hobby'结构不完整，应改为'I just see it as a hobby'，使句子通顺。

× Yeah, singing is is excellent, but I just enjoy it.

✓ Yeah, singing is excellent, but I just enjoy it.

句中出现了重复的'is'，应删除多余的一个。

× I want to sing for my mother because she's very love me and she always thinks about me and always care for me.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she loves me very much, and she always thinks about me and always cares for me.

'she's very love me'中，'she's'应为'she'，动词love需用第三人称单数形式'loves'；'always care'应为'cares'，保持主谓一致。

× She's essential to me and she always helped me in my life.

✓ She's essential to me, and she has always helped me in my life.

'helped'应使用现在完成时'have helped'表示从过去到现在的持续动作。

× when you are in the fabric of singing, you may feel delightful and singing will help you relieve your suggest and thinking can also bring you happy, which is very.

✓ When you are in the habit of singing, you may feel delighted, and singing will help you relieve your stress. Thinking can also bring you happiness, which is very important.

'in the fabric of singing'应为'in the habit of singing'；'feel delightful'应为'feel delighted'，形容人的感受；'relieve your suggest'应为'relieve your stress'；'bring you happy'应为'bring you happiness'；句尾不完整，补充完整。