Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答自然且内容丰富，但可以稍微简化，避免重复表达“relax”和“release the stress”，使语言更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after work and allows me to connect with my friends during karaoke sessions.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，内容具体。可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯，例如使用“however”来连接前后句。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had the opportunity to learn singing because my parents didn't allow me to pursue artistic hobbies; however, now that I have grown up, I plan to take singing lessons to explore my potential.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且自然，建议在句子间加入更多连接词如“because”或“so that”来增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my closest friends because they have always supported me, so singing in front of them is relaxing and I don't worry about making mistakes.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁但略显简单，可以增加具体例子或解释来丰富内容，使表达更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music creates a positive atmosphere; for example, lively songs at parties often lift everyone's mood instantly.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

“learnt”是英式英语的过去分词形式，而在美式英语中更常用“learned”。根据上下文和习惯用法，建议使用“learned”以保持一致性。

× I think people's emotion will be greatly influenced by the atmosphere in music.

✓ I think people's emotions will be greatly influenced by the atmosphere in music.

“emotion”应使用复数形式“emotions”，因为这里指的是人们的多种情感。单数形式不符合语境，需改为复数。