Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "dancing together it" is incorrect and "It's always fun time for me" could be more natural. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Singing is my favorite activity because I enjoy gathering with my friends to sing and dance. It creates a joyful atmosphere, and we always have a great time together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and using more precise vocabulary. For example, "as a leisure" should be "as a leisure activity" and "didn't think about taking it seriously like taking a class" can be rephrased for clarity. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't. I just enjoy singing as a leisure activity and haven't considered taking it seriously by attending classes or a singing school.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest but could be more structured and natural. Avoid filler words like "Uh" and try to combine sentences using linking words for better flow. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as "people I close" should be "people I'm close to."

Ví dụ: I prefer to sing only for my family and close friends because I'm not very confident in my singing skills and don't feel comfortable performing in public.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly, use correct grammar, and include linking words. Also, be specific about how singing brings happiness and connects people.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Singing is a fun group activity that brings people together through music and rhythm. It helps connect individuals regardless of language or cultural differences, which can bring happiness to everyone involved.

× I like the feeling of gathering together, enjoying the song and dancing together it.

✓ I like the feeling of gathering together, enjoying the song, and dancing together.

The phrase 'dancing together it' is incorrect because the pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrectly placed. The correct structure is to list the activities without adding 'it' after 'dancing together'. Removing 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learnt' is a past tense form commonly used in British English, while 'learned' is the preferred past participle in American English. Since the question uses present perfect tense ('have you ever'), the past participle 'learned' is appropriate here for consistency with American English.

× I just enjoy doing it as a leisure but didn't think about taking it seriously like taking a class or going to singing school.

✓ I just enjoy doing it as a leisure activity but haven't thought about taking it seriously, like taking a class or going to singing school.

The phrase 'as a leisure' is incomplete; it should be 'as a leisure activity'. Also, the tense inconsistency between 'enjoy' (present) and 'didn't think' (past) is corrected to 'haven't thought' to maintain present perfect tense consistent with 'just enjoy'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Just people I close, that's all.

✓ Just people I'm close to, that's all.

The phrase 'people I close' is incorrect because the verb 'close' requires a preposition 'to' and the auxiliary verb 'am' to form 'I'm close to'. This correction properly expresses the intended meaning of being close to certain people.

× I think that thinking is such a fun activity to do it together and music and song and release and the rhythm, the element that easily connect people together without any language barrier or culture.

✓ I think that singing is such a fun activity to do together, and music, song, rhythm, and release are elements that easily connect people together without any language or cultural barriers.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant and misplaced words like 'thinking' instead of 'singing', and 'do it together' is awkward. The correction clarifies the subject ('singing'), removes unnecessary words, and properly lists elements that connect people. Also, 'connect' is changed to 'connects' to agree with plural subject 'elements', and 'language barrier or culture' is corrected to 'language or cultural barriers' for clarity and correctness.