Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议用简洁明了的句子表达自己的观点，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident in my singing skills. I prefer listening to music instead.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，清楚说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because my parents think academic subjects are more important than arts. So, they didn't let me attend any singing classes.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但句子结构可以更清晰，避免语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: It depends on the person. For example, I would sing a romantic song for someone special, like my future wife or girlfriend.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且重复，语法错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I don't think singing brings happiness to everyone. For me, I feel embarrassed singing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music.

× No, I don't like things because I'm not confident of my thinking and I prefer to listen to music rather than singing.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my voice and I prefer to listen to music rather than sing.

这里的 'things' 用法不当，应该具体指代 'singing'。另外，'confident of my thinking' 语法和表达不正确，应该是 'confident in my voice'。建议用更准确的词汇表达意思。

× No, I never learned how to sing because my parents believed academic science is more important than the art shows.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing because my parents believed academic science was more important than art shows.

句中时态不一致，前半句是过去时，后半句也应使用过去时 'was'，而不是现在时 'is'。此外，'the art shows' 中的定冠词 'the' 不合适，应去掉。

× They don't take me to a after class at class.

✓ They didn't take me to any after-class activities.

原句中 'a after class at class' 结构混乱，'a' 和 'after class' 搭配错误，且 'at class' 多余。应改为 'any after-class activities' 表达更准确。

× It depends on the persons.

✓ It depends on the person.

'persons' 在这里用法不当，通常用单数 'person' 表示某个特定的人。

× Maybe a special person for me such as my future wife or girlfriends, I will sing a romantic song for her.

✓ Maybe a special person for me, such as my future wife or girlfriend; I will sing a romantic song for her.

'girlfriends' 应为单数 'girlfriend'，因为指的是可能的未来伴侣之一。

× No, I don't think things can bring happiness to people because like me, I don't like things and I'm not confident of my seeing abilities and I prefer singing.

✓ No, I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because, like me, I don't like singing and I'm not confident in my singing abilities.

'things' 用法不当，应具体指 'singing'。'confident of my seeing abilities' 语法错误，应为 'confident in my singing abilities'。

× I prefer listening to music rather than singing and I feel embarrassed when I sing in front of others.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing, and I feel embarrassed when I sing in front of others.

此句语法基本正确，仅在连接词前加逗号使句子更通顺。