Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中多次出现了“seeing”这个词，应该是想说“singing”，这影响了表达的准确性。建议注意发音和拼写，避免词汇错误。此外，句子结构较为简单，且有语法错误，如“seeing make me happy”应为“singing makes me happy”。可以尝试使用更丰富的词汇和更准确的语法表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me relieve stress after a long day. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions directly, which is very satisfying.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“our teacher usually teach me”应为“our teacher usually teaches me”，“she also provide me”应为“she also provides me”，“those is”应为“those are”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免使用“uh”等口语填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing because my major is pop music performance. My teacher usually teaches me singing techniques and gives me useful tips on maintaining confidence during performances.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现“saying”或“thing”，应为“singing”。这类词汇错误影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强词汇的准确使用和发音练习。此外，句子结构可以更连贯，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents because they work very hard to support my education. Singing for them helps them relax after a long day, and it also makes me feel closer to them. I hope my singing can bring them some happiness.

Gợi ý: 回答中“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子未完整结束，缺少结尾部分。建议注意发音和拼写，确保回答完整。同时，使用连接词如“moreover”后应完整表达观点，避免句子断裂。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is one of the most direct ways to express our emotions. People often feel relaxed and joyful when they sing their favorite songs. Moreover, singing together with others can create a strong sense of connection and community.

× Actually yes, I am a big fan of seeing and I think seeing make me happy and it can reduce my stress after long day and it can also impress my emotion directly.

✓ Actually yes, I am a big fan of singing and I think singing makes me happy and it can reduce my stress after a long day and it can also impress my emotion directly.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，是拼写错误。'singing'是不可数名词，表示唱歌。动词'make'应改为'makes'，因为主语'singing'是第三人称单数，动词需与主语一致。'after long day'缺少冠词，应为'after a long day'。

× Actually yes, I am a big fan of seeing and I think seeing make me happy and it can reduce my stress after long day and it can also impress my emotion directly.

✓ Actually yes, I am a big fan of singing and I think singing makes me happy and it can reduce my stress after a long day and it can also impress my emotion directly.

动词'make'应与第三人称单数主语'singing'一致，改为'makes'。

× Actually yes, I am a big fan of seeing and I think seeing make me happy and it can reduce my stress after long day and it can also impress my emotion directly.

✓ Actually yes, I am a big fan of singing and I think singing makes me happy and it can reduce my stress after a long day and it can also impress my emotion directly.

短语'after long day'中缺少冠词'a'，应为'after a long day'。

× Actually, yes, uh, because my major is pop music performance and our teacher usually teach me some skills about how to sing and she also provide me some tips about how to keep confidence during the performance.

✓ Actually, yes, uh, because my major is pop music performance and our teacher usually teaches me some skills about how to sing and she also provides me some tips about how to keep confidence during the performance.

动词'teach'和'provide'应与第三人称单数主语'our teacher'一致，改为'teaches'和'provides'。

× I think those is very useful.

✓ I think those are very useful.

指代复数'those'时，动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。

× Saying for them is my way to help them relax after a long day of work.

✓ Singing for them is my way to help them relax after a long day of work.

动词'saying'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× It makes me feel closer to them and I hope my thing can breathe them some happiness.

✓ It makes me feel closer to them and I hope my singing can bring them some happiness.

'thing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。动词'breathe'用错，应为'bring'，表示带来。

× Actually, yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because in my opinion it is one of the most direct way to express our emotion and they often feel very relaxed and joyful when they sing their favorite song and moreover, singing together with others can create a sense of connection and.

✓ Actually, yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because in my opinion it is one of the most direct ways to express our emotions and they often feel very relaxed and joyful when they sing their favorite songs and moreover, singing together with others can create a sense of connection.

'singing'拼写错误。'way'应为复数'ways'，因为前面有'most'修饰。'emotion'应为复数'emotions'。'song'应为复数'songs'。句末多余'and'，应删除。