Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to be more concise and use clearer expressions. Avoid filler words like 'UMM' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions. Moreover, it is a popular hobby that many people share, which makes it even more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your response is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammatical mistakes. Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Also, check verb tenses and sentence structure for accuracy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned to sing professionally. Specifically, I received training from fifth to sixth grade because I am very passionate about singing and improving my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid informal words like 'kinda'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer to sing for my friends and family because I am quite shy and find it difficult to perform in front of large audiences. Therefore, singing for people I know feels more comfortable and enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Definitely, singing is a powerful activity that can improve your mood and bring peace. It involves many emotions, and happiness is certainly one of them.

× singing has always been a longest hobby for me, except drawing.

✓ singing has always been the longest hobby for me, except drawing.

The adjective 'longest' is a superlative and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× It is such a ubiquitous UMM hobby that a lot of people share.

✓ It is such a ubiquitous hobby that a lot of people share.

The filler 'UMM' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity and correctness.

× Without adopt as I mentioned thing has been my longest hobby, so of course umm in a certain point of my life I learned to sing and train professionally.

✓ Without adopting, as I mentioned, singing has been my longest hobby, so of course at a certain point in my life I learned to sing and train professionally.

The phrase 'Without adopt' is incorrect; it should be 'Without adopting'. Also, 'in a certain point' should be 'at a certain point' to correctly use the preposition with 'point'.

× I really passionate about singing itself and specially training.

✓ I am really passionate about singing itself and especially training.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to link the subject and adjective. Also, 'specially' is incorrect here; 'especially' is the correct adverb to express emphasis.

× If I had to take a stance I'd say both my friends and family because I am kinda shy and not as outgoing as other sinners so I find it hard for me to sing in a public situation for the publics in the crowd like performing.

✓ If I had to take a stance, I'd say both my friends and family because I am kinda shy and not as outgoing as other singers, so I find it hard to sing in public situations for the people in the crowd, like performing.

The word 'sinners' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'singers'. 'For me' after 'hard' is unnecessary and awkward; 'hard to sing' is correct. 'Public situation' should be plural 'public situations'. 'Publics' is incorrect; 'people' or 'audience' is appropriate.

× But still I would love to sing for my friends and family as a pace.

✓ But still, I would love to sing for my friends and family as a pastime.

The word 'pace' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'pastime', meaning an activity done for enjoyment.

× Definitely, singing is such a compelling things to do when you want to make your mood better, lighter, or even just make you peaceful.

✓ Definitely, singing is such a compelling thing to do when you want to make your mood better, lighter, or even just make you peaceful.

The noun 'things' is plural but should be singular 'thing' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'.

× I think seeing itself has a lot of mixed emotions in it, so definitely happiness is one of them.

✓ I think singing itself has a lot of mixed emotions in it, so definitely happiness is one of them.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or mispronunciation for 'singing', which is the intended subject.