Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Actually I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I do that very rarely because I'm really shy person and I feel uncomfortable performing publicly.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not really into that and I'm more fond on drawing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I'd like to sing for my best friends because I really love them and by singing I would like to express my feelings to them.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes, because I really love listening to music because it helps me be motivated and helps me to relax.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Ответ естественный и понятный, но можно улучшить связность и убрать небольшие ошибки. Например, добавить артикль "a" перед "really shy person" и использовать связующее слово для плавного перехода между предложениями.
Ví dụ: Actually, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I do it very rarely since I am a really shy person, so I feel uncomfortable performing publicly.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Ответ короткий и немного неестественный. Лучше использовать правильный предлог "fond of" вместо "fond on" и добавить связующее слово для плавности.
Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not really into it, and instead, I'm more fond of drawing.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить структуру и добавить связующее слово для более естественного звучания.
Ví dụ: I'd like to sing for my best friends because I really love them, and by singing, I would like to express my feelings to them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторение "because" и немного неестественен. Лучше использовать синонимы и связующие слова для улучшения плавности.
Ví dụ: Definitely yes, as I really love listening to music since it motivates me and helps me relax.
Ngữ pháp
× Actually I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I do that very rarely because I'm really shy person and I feel uncomfortable performing publicly.
✓ Actually I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I do that very rarely because I'm a really shy person and I feel uncomfortable performing publicly.
The phrase 'I'm really shy person' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really shy person'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'person' is a singular countable noun, so 'a' is necessary.
× No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not really into that and I'm more fond on drawing.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not really into that and I'm more fond of drawing.
The phrase 'fond on drawing' is incorrect because the correct preposition to use with 'fond' is 'of'. The correct expression is 'fond of something'.
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