Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时时态混乱，应该统一使用现在时或过去时，且句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词，建议简化句子结构，使用适当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing very much. When I was a child, I often sang at school and at home. I believe singing makes me happy and helps me relax. Also, my friends enjoy singing too.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，且表达不够连贯，建议注意动词时态一致，避免口头语，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned singing formally. I usually listen to the radio or tapes and try to imitate the songs. I believe anyone can learn to sing by themselves if they practice regularly.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且缺少连贯性，建议使用连接词连接句子，避免重复表达，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents, my son, and my friends because I love them. Singing for them makes me happy, and I hope my singing can bring joy to them as well.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了词汇错误（将'singing'误说成'swimming'），且表达不够准确，建议注意词汇准确性，使用具体例子支持观点，并保持句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone feels sad or nervous, listening to or singing songs can help them relax and feel better.

× I like singing very much when I was a child I always sing in the school and at home and I do think that singing can help me to be happy and help me to umm do many things and my friends love singing.

✓ I liked singing very much when I was a child. I always sang in the school and at home, and I do think that singing can help me to be happy and help me to umm do many things, and my friends love singing.

句子中描述过去的习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式。'like'应改为'liked'，'sing'应改为'sang'，以符合过去时态的表达。

× No, I haven't. I just listened to the radio or listen to the tape and follow them.

✓ No, I haven't. I just listened to the radio or listened to the tape and followed them.

句子中并列的动词应保持时态一致，且在描述过去动作时应使用过去式。'listen'和'follow'应改为'listened'和'followed'。

× Yes, I do think swimming can bring happiness to all of us.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to all of us.

此处原句中提到的是唱歌(singing)，但误用了'swimming'（游泳），应改为'singing'以符合上下文。

× When you are sad or when you are very nervous, you can listen to the tape or listen to the music.

✓ When you are sad or when you are very nervous, you can listen to the tape or listen to music.

'listen to music'是固定搭配，通常不加定冠词'the'，因此应去掉'the'。