Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and improve fluency by linking your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid ending with filler words like 'Yeah'. Try to be more concise and natural in your response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially classical songs, because I grew up in a home where my mother was a choir master. Singing helps me express my emotions and relax after a stressful day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but some words are unclear or incorrect, like 'queries' which should be 'choir rehearsals' or 'practice sessions'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas better and avoid short, choppy sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I started learning to sing when I was about seven years old. My mother, who was a choir leader then, used to take me to choir rehearsals, which helped me develop my singing skills and gave me the chance to practice with others.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'not sure these skills in me'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I would love to sing for my late mother because she was the one who nurtured my singing skills. When I was little, she was a choir leader and took me to choir practices with her. So, if I had the chance, I would definitely sing for her.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but some grammar errors and incomplete sentences. Use linking words properly and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'can boost their emotions can boost their mood'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps lift people's spirits and reduce stress. For instance, when someone feels down, listening to or singing their favorite song can improve their mood. Additionally, singing often creates a sense of connection among people.

× Besides, singing also helped me to express my emotion and also relax after having a stressful day.

✓ Besides, singing also helped me to express my emotions and also relax after having a stressful day.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to multiple feelings expressed through singing. Using the plural form is appropriate here to indicate a variety of emotions.

× My mother, who was a choir leader as of that time, would usually take me to queries.

✓ My mother, who was a choir leader at that time, would usually take me to choir rehearsals.

The phrase 'as of that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at that time' to indicate a specific period in the past. Also, 'queries' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'choir rehearsals' or 'choir practice' to describe singing practice sessions.

× So it helped me to develop my skills in singing and also give me the chance to practice with others.

✓ So it helped me to develop my skills in singing and also gave me the chance to practice with others.

The verb 'give' should be in the past tense 'gave' to agree with the past tense 'helped' used earlier in the sentence, maintaining consistent tense.

× I would really love to sing for my mom, my late mom, because she was the one that not sure these skills in me.

✓ I would really love to sing for my mom, my late mom, because she was the one that nurtured these skills in me.

The phrase 'not sure these skills in me' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that the mother developed or nurtured the skills. Therefore, 'nurtured these skills in me' is the correct expression.

× So if I would sing for anybody should be for my mommy if I'm giving the chance to.

✓ So if I were to sing for anybody, it should be for my mommy if I were given the chance.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and conditional structure. Using 'if I were to sing' and 'if I were given the chance' correctly forms the conditional sentence, and the phrase 'it should be for my mommy' is the proper subject-verb-object order.

× Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it help lift their spirit and reduce stress For instance, when someone is feeling down, listening to their favorite song or singing along can boost their emotions can boost their mood.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps lift their spirits and reduce stress. For instance, when someone is feeling down, listening to their favorite song or singing along can boost their emotions and can boost their mood.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (singing). Also, 'spirit' should be plural 'spirits' as it refers to people's moods. Additionally, the sentence was missing a conjunction 'and' between 'boost their emotions' and 'can boost their mood' to connect the two clauses properly.

× Additionally, singing often create a sense of connection and.

✓ Additionally, singing often creates a sense of connection.

The verb 'create' should be 'creates' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. The sentence was incomplete, so the ending was removed to make it grammatically correct and complete.