Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用正确时态，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I enjoy listening to my own voice, which helps me relieve stress.

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏条理，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确时间和经历，并避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. When I was young, I attended many music classes at school, but now I just sing along to songs I like.

Gợi ý: 回答中有发音和用词错误，句子不完整，表达不连贯。建议使用清晰的句子结构，准确表达感情和理由。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom because I love her very much. She is an amazing woman, and singing for her is my way to show my appreciation.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it expresses emotions and connects people through music.

× When I was singing I'm very happy.

✓ When I am singing, I am very happy.

这里描述的是现在的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去进行时。'When I was singing' 应改为 'When I am singing'，表示每次唱歌时的感受。

× I'm really enjoying my voice and the reason, so I think singing is a good way to relax.

✓ I really enjoy my voice and the reason, so I think singing is a good way to relax.

这里表达的是一般事实和感受，应该用一般现在时 'enjoy'，而不是现在进行时 'am enjoying'。

× Uh, actually no, I just singing by myself.

✓ Uh, actually no, I just sing by myself.

'just' 后面应接动词原形或一般现在时，'singing' 是动名词形式，不符合语法。

× But when I grow up I just singing to follow the beautiful boys or good song.

✓ But when I grew up, I just sang to follow the beautiful boys or good songs.

这里描述过去的动作，应该用过去时 'grew up' 和 'sang'，而不是现在时或动名词形式。

× Yes, we do have a lot of music class when I was young, like they, they they the young school.

✓ Yes, we did have a lot of music classes when I was young, like at the young school.

描述过去的情况，应该用过去时 'did have'，并且 'class' 应为复数 'classes'。

× Yes, we do have a lot of music class when I was young, like they, they they the young school.

✓ Yes, we did have a lot of music classes when I was young, like at the young school.

'a lot of' 后面应接可数名词复数形式，'class' 应改为 'classes'。

× Yes, we do have a lot of music class when I was young, like they, they they the young school.

✓ Yes, we did have a lot of music classes when I was young, like at the young school.

表示地点时应使用介词 'at'，而不是 'they'。

× like they, they they the young school.

✓ like at the young school.

这里 'they' 用法错误，应改为介词短语 'at the young school'。

× About who I want to sell for, I think is a is my mom because, you know, I love my mom really much and she is a brilliant or amazing woman.

✓ About who I want to sing for, I think it is my mom because, you know, I love my mom very much and she is a brilliant and amazing woman.

'sell' 应为 'sing'，'is a is' 多余，应改为 'it is'，'really much' 应改为 'very much'，'or' 应改为 'and' 连接形容词。

× I love my mom really much

✓ I love my mom very much

'really much' 不是正确的表达，应该用 'very much' 来表达程度。

× she is a brilliant or amazing woman.

✓ she is a brilliant and amazing woman.

'or' 用于选择，这里应表示两个形容词同时存在，故用 'and'。

× And the other reason is that.

✓ And there is another reason.

原句不完整，缺少谓语，需补充完整句子。

× Yes, we do have a lot of music class when I was young, like they, they they the young school.

✓ Yes, we did have a lot of music classes when I was young, like at the young school.

这里描述过去的情况，应该用过去时 'did have'，并且 'class' 应为复数 'classes'。

× But when I grow up I just singing to follow the beautiful boys or good song.

✓ But when I grew up, I just sang to follow the beautiful boys or good songs.

描述过去动作，动词应使用过去时 'grew up' 和 'sang'，'song' 应为复数 'songs'。

× But when I grow up I just singing to follow the beautiful boys or good song.

✓ But when I grew up, I just sang to follow the beautiful boys or good songs.

'song' 应为复数 'songs'，因为前面用了 'or' 连接多个对象。

× Yes, I do think so, because singing with a beautiful voice or beautiful reason makes me makes people happy.

✓ Yes, I do think so, because singing with a beautiful voice or for a beautiful reason makes me and makes people happy.

'makes me makes people happy' 结构重复，应改为 'makes me and makes people happy'，'beautiful reason' 前应加介词 'for'。