Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and clear, but try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for better effectiveness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it refreshes my mind and brings me happiness. However, due to my hectic schedule, I don't get to sing as often as I'd like.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid short or incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I started learning to sing when I was 8 years old, as my mother enrolled me in a music class. I trained there for two years, but I couldn't complete the lessons because I had to balance my badminton career and studies at that time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your point clearly with fewer words and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I am quite introverted, so I usually sing for myself. However, if I get an opportunity, I would be willing to sing in front of others.

Gợi ý: Good answer with clear opinion and supporting details. To improve, you can add linking words to enhance coherence and use more specific examples.

Ví dụ: I believe it depends on the person; while some find happiness in singing because it relieves stress, others prefer coping methods like exercise or meditation.

× Personally, I love to sing, it just refreshes my mind and it brings a sense of happiness.

✓ Personally, I love to sing because it just refreshes my mind and brings a sense of happiness.

The original sentence is a comma splice, joining two independent clauses with only a comma. This is incorrect sentence structure. Using 'because' properly connects the clauses, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× So.

The word 'So.' is a sentence fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be removed or completed to avoid sentence structure errors.