Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误，'saying' 应该是 'singing'，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因，例如用 'because it makes me feel happy when I am sad'。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and lifts my mood when I am sad.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次使用错误的词汇，如 'say' 应为 'sing'，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答并说明原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I find singing relaxing and enjoyable even without formal lessons.

Gợi ý: 回答简短且缺乏细节。建议扩展回答，说明为什么想为家人唱歌，使用连接词丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because they always support me, and singing for them makes me feel closer to them.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness because it helps me feel joyful, and I believe it can make older people happy as well.

× I really like saying it because it can let me feel high and happy if I'm so sad.

✓ I really like singing because it can make me feel happy when I'm sad.

这里'saying'用错了，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。'like'后面接动名词形式。'let me feel high and happy'表达不自然，改为'make me feel happy'更合适。

× I never learned how to say because I think singing is led me to relax and happy so I do not learn it.

✓ I never learned how to sing because I think singing helps me relax and feel happy, so I did not learn it.

'say'应改为'sing'，表示唱歌。'is led me'时态和语态错误，改为'helps me'。'do not learn'时态不对，应该用过去时'did not learn'。

× I never learned how to say because I think singing is led me to relax and happy so I do not learn it.

✓ I never learned how to sing because I think singing helps me relax and feel happy, so I did not learn it.

同上，'singing is led me'错误，应该用动词原形或第三人称单数形式。

× I think it's my family.

✓ I think it's for my family.

回答中缺少介词'for'，表示'为我的家人'。

× Of course, because when I thought that I will, I will to singing let me feel happy.

✓ Of course, because when I think about it, singing makes me feel happy.

'thought'时态不对，应为现在时'think'。'I will to singing'结构错误，应该用'singing makes me feel happy'。

× I think older peoples to singing will feel happy too.

✓ I think older people singing will feel happy too.

'peoples'是错误的复数形式，正确为'people'。'to singing'错误，应直接用动名词'singing'。