Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。より自然な英語表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、"Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and I have enjoyed it since I was a child."のように簡潔に答えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and I have enjoyed it since I was a child.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。正しい時制と単語を使い、簡潔に答えることが必要です。例えば、"Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a high school student with my teacher."のように表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a high school student with my teacher.

Gợi ý: 意味は伝わりますが、「in advance」の使い方が不自然です。より適切な表現を使い、理由を明確にしましょう。例えば、"I want to sing for my sister because she is getting married soon."のように言えます。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my sister because she is getting married soon.

Gợi ý: 繰り返しや文法の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくいです。簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it makes me and others feel joyful."のように答えられます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it makes me and others feel joyful.

× If I do, I like to sing.

✓ If I do, I like singing.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Using 'like to sing' is not incorrect but less natural in this context. Using 'like singing' fits better here.

× Since I have since I was a kid because singing is make me happy every day.

✓ I have liked singing since I was a kid because singing makes me happy every day.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'Since I have since I was a kid' is redundant and incorrect. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. The corrected sentence uses present perfect 'have liked' to express an action continuing from the past to present, and 'makes' for subject-verb agreement.

× Yes I have when I was high school student I have been learning how to think by my teacher.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was a high school student, I learned how to sing from my teacher.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Have been learning' is present perfect continuous, which is inappropriate for a completed past action. 'Learned' is the correct simple past tense. Also, 'how to think' is likely a mistake for 'how to sing'. Added commas for clarity.

× Yes I have when I was high school student I have been learning how to think by my teacher.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was a high school student, I learned how to sing from my teacher.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'from' is used to indicate the source of learning. Also, 'high school student' needs an article 'a' before it.

× I want to sing for my sister because she will be married in advance.

✓ I want to sing for my sister because she will be getting married soon.

The phrase 'will be married in advance' is unnatural. 'Will be getting married soon' correctly expresses a future event that is planned or expected.

× I think so because when I'm I'm because when I'm singing I feel very happy and also when I'm singing, the people who allowed me is very looks very happy.

✓ I think so because when I'm singing, I feel very happy, and also, the people who listen to me look very happy.

The sentence has repeated words 'I'm I'm' and incorrect pronoun usage 'the people who allowed me'. It should be 'the people who listen to me'. Also, 'is very looks very happy' is incorrect; 'look very happy' is correct subject-verb agreement and verb form.