Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite natural and expressive, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your answers concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, pay attention to grammar and word choice, for example, use 'feelings' instead of 'that feelings' and 'makes me feel' instead of 'makes me feels'. Using linking words like 'because' and 'so' is good, but try to structure your answer more clearly with a topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions effectively. For instance, when I'm feeling sad, I sing sad songs to connect with my feelings, which helps me feel better and move on quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and incomplete. Avoid hesitations like 'Yeah' in your response. Also, try to form complete sentences and use correct verb tenses, for example, 'since I actually sang properly'. Adding a clear topic sentence and supporting details will improve your answer's structure and clarity.

Ví dụ: I haven't formally learnt how to sing, but I would love to take lessons from a professional. It's been quite a while since I last sang properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and personal, which is good. However, avoid repeating 'she's someone who' twice; instead, use linking words like 'and' or 'who'. Also, 'musics' should be 'music' as it is uncountable. Try to make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I would like to sing for my future wife, especially if she loves music and enjoys Korean songs.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your opinion clearly, but there are some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, use 'it kind of amplifies' instead of 'it kind of amplify', and 'bring' should be 'brings'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'certainly' and 'definitely' together. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When you sing a happy song, it amplifies your own joy and can also spread happiness to those around you.

× I think it's because singing allows me to express my emotion very efficiently.

✓ I think it's because singing allows me to express my emotions very efficiently.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to various feelings, not just one. Using the plural form is more natural when talking about expressing feelings in general.

× when I'm sad, I would sing some sad song to kind of resonate with that feelings and actually makes me feels better

✓ when I'm sad, I would sing some sad songs to kind of resonate with those feelings and actually make me feel better

The pronouns and verb forms need to agree in number and person. 'Some sad song' should be plural 'some sad songs' to match 'feelings'. 'That feelings' should be 'those feelings' to match plural. 'Makes me feels' is incorrect; it should be 'make me feel' because the subject is plural and the verb should be base form after 'actually'.

× when you know, I'm singing a sad song when I'm sad so that I could kind of relive and walk out from that emotion very quickly.

✓ when you know, I'm singing a sad song when I'm sad so that I can kind of relive and walk out from that emotion very quickly.

The modal verb 'could' is replaced with 'can' to express ability in the present context. 'Could' implies past or conditional, but here the speaker talks about a habitual action.

× It has been quite some time before I Yeah, it has been quite some time since I actually sing properly.

✓ It has been quite some time since I actually sang properly.

The phrase 'It has been quite some time since' requires the past tense verb 'sang' to indicate the last time the action happened. 'Sing' is present tense and incorrect here.

× I think I would like to sing for my future wife and hopefully she's someone who loves musics and also she's someone who loves Korean music.

✓ I think I would like to sing for my future wife and hopefully she's someone who loves music and also she's someone who loves Korean music.

The word 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. It should be 'music'.

× Feels like when you are singing a happy song, it kind of amplify your happiness and it allows you to come bring happiness to everyone besides you as well.

✓ It feels like when you are singing a happy song, it kind of amplifies your happiness and it allows you to bring happiness to everyone besides you as well.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' at the start. The verb 'amplify' should be 'amplifies' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Come bring' is incorrect; 'bring' alone is sufficient.

× So certainly singing definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ So certainly singing definitely brings happiness to people.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' in present tense.