Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然で感情を表現していますが、「When I think lovely」の表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より具体的で自然な表現を使い、文のつながりを明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve the stress from my daily routine. When I sing my favorite songs, I feel joyful and relaxed, which improves my mood. Singing is a great way for me to express my emotions and feel happier.

Gợi ý: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくいです。「rant」や「how can I improve my song」の使い方が不自然です。簡潔で正確な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I just enjoy singing loudly to express my stress.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤りが目立ちます。「very smile」や「in front in front of her」の繰り返しは避けましょう。より自然な表現を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my girlfriend because she is always kind and listens to my singing. She smiles a lot and gives me feedback to help me improve. Therefore, I want to sing in front of her.

Gợi ý: 全体的に良い回答ですが、最初の「Happiness to people Yes,」は不自然です。よりスムーズな導入を心がけ、具体例とのつながりを明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many well-known artists have released popular Christmas songs that make people feel joyful and uplifted. Singing along to cheerful music can instantly improve someone's mood.

× No, I've never rant about how can I improve my song.

✓ No, I've never ranted about how I can improve my song.

The verb 'rant' should be in the past participle form 'ranted' to correctly follow the present perfect tense 'have never'. Also, the word order in the indirect question should be 'how I can improve' instead of 'how can I improve'.

× she's always kind and listen to my singing, very smile and gives me some feedback to improve my singing.

✓ she's always kind and listens to my singing, smiles a lot, and gives me some feedback to improve my singing.

The verb 'listen' should be 'listens' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. 'Very smile' is incorrect; it should be 'smiles a lot' or 'is very smiley'. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunctions to connect the clauses.

× So I want to sing in front in front of her.

✓ So I want to sing in front of her.

The phrase 'in front in front of' is redundant. The correct preposition phrase is 'in front of'.