Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和词汇的正确使用。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体原因支持你的观点。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult. When I was young, I tried to sing along with music, but my family said I wasn't very good at it.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复和不必要的信息，保持回答的相关性和逻辑性。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned to sing because I think it's too difficult. Instead, I have spent several years learning to draw comics.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意时态和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me. I want to show my gratitude and bring them happiness without worrying about my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子支持观点，避免语法错误和不连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For example, after disasters, the government often arranges singers to perform and cheer up the affected people.

× I don't, I don't like seeing, I prefer to listening to music.

✓ I don't, I don't like singing, I prefer listening to music.

动词后面跟动名词时，动词prefer后应直接接动名词形式listening，而不是to listening。这里的like后面也应使用动名词形式singing。

× Uh, I try to sing for when I was young, I follow the music and sing along with them.

✓ Uh, I tried to sing when I was young, I followed the music and sang along with it.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去式。try、follow、sing应改为tried、followed、sang。

× But later it's a comment from my family have show that I have no talent in singing.

✓ But later, a comment from my family showed that I have no talent in singing.

句子中主语和谓语不一致，'it's a comment'应改为'a comment'，动词have show应改为showed，且代词them不适用，改为it指代music。

× No, I haven't because it's too difficult for me.

✓ No, I haven't because it was too difficult for me.

这里描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去式，is改为was。

× I have to practice guitar for a little while, but it doesn't work for a long time and but instead I learn how to draw the sketch and comic for a long time for several 5 or 6 years.

✓ I practiced guitar for a little while, but it didn't work for long, so instead I learned how to draw sketches and comics for about 5 or 6 years.

句子中连词使用重复且不当，应去掉多余的but，使用so连接因果关系。动词时态应为过去式。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

动词sing后通常搭配介词to表示“为某人唱歌”，而不是for。

× Then I want I want to bring the happiness and emotional support to them and they are they will not judge the skill.

✓ Then I want to bring happiness and emotional support to them, and they will not judge my skill.

句子中重复“I want”，应删除多余部分。连接词and前后句子结构不完整，需调整。

× and they are they will not judge the skill.

✓ and they will not judge my skill.

代词使用错误，the skill应改为my skill，且去掉多余的they are。

× Yes, of course it's from the government.

✓ Yes, of course, it is from the government.

句子中缺少逗号，影响理解。

× When things go wrong in some place, for example, some severe events were catalotic happen, the government will send the singer to sing for people and after that the rate of people's happiness will increase.

✓ When things go wrong in some places, for example, when some severe catastrophic events happen, the government will send singers to sing for people, and after that, the rate of people's happiness increases.

动词时态和单复数错误。were catalotic happen应改为when some severe catastrophic events happen。singer改为singers，happiness will increase改为happiness increases更符合习惯表达。