Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容もやや冗長です。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、文法を正し、具体的な理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I feel excited when I sing because it is fun and a good exercise.」のようにシンプルにまとめると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel excited and it's a fun way to exercise my voice.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、「No, I have never taken singing lessons because I just enjoy singing casually with my friends.」のように簡潔に答えましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I just enjoy singing casually with my friends.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りがあり、意味が少し分かりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I want to sing for my girlfriend because she always listens to my songs and encourages me.」のように表現すると良いです。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my girlfriend because she always listens to my songs and encourages me.

Gợi ý: 回答が不完全で文法的な誤りも多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べることが大切です。例えば、「Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because many artists around the world make people happy through their songs.」のように答えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because many artists around the world make people happy through their songs.

× Yes, I like singing because I can feel excite while I singing, and singing a song is just more than a heavy exercise, more than just run, and it's just fun.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I can feel excited while I am singing, and singing a song is more than just heavy exercise, more than just running, and it's just fun.

The word 'excite' should be the adjective 'excited' to describe the feeling. Also, 'while I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'while I am singing' to use the present continuous tense properly. 'More than just run' should be 'more than just running' to use the gerund form after 'more than just'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× No, I've never run. I'm not really based on the singing, so it's enough to sing with having fun with my friends. So I've never learned about thing and I don't need to learn about them.

✓ No, I've never learned. I'm not really into singing, so it's enough to sing and have fun with my friends. So I've never learned about it and I don't need to learn about it.

The phrase 'I've never run' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I've never learned' to match the question about learning to sing. 'I'm not really based on the singing' is incorrect; 'I'm not really into singing' is the correct expression. 'Sing with having fun' should be 'sing and have fun' for proper coordination. 'Learned about thing' should be 'learned about it' to use the correct pronoun. These changes correct tense and expression errors.

× I want to sing for my girlfriend, she's always hear my songs and always evaluate me for it's very good or something so I want to sing for her.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend; she always hears my songs and always evaluates me, saying they are very good or something, so I want to sing for her.

The pronoun 'she's' should be separated into 'she' and the verb 'hears' to agree in third person singular. 'Hear' should be 'hears' to match the subject. 'Evaluate me for it's very good' is incorrect; it should be 'evaluates me, saying they are very good' to clarify the meaning. These corrections fix pronoun and verb agreement issues.

× Yes, absolutely. I think so. There are many artists in all over the world and they make peoples happy to through their songs so. I think the happiness is important for.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think so. There are many artists all over the world and they make people happy through their songs. So, I think happiness is important.

The phrase 'in all over the world' is incorrect; it should be 'all over the world' without 'in'. 'Peoples' should be 'people' as the plural of 'person' is 'people'. 'Make peoples happy to through their songs' is incorrect; it should be 'make people happy through their songs'. The sentence 'I think the happiness is important for' is incomplete; it should be 'I think happiness is important'. These corrections address errors in the use of 'there is/are', prepositions, plural forms, and sentence completeness.