Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать повторений и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, можно сказать, что пение помогает расслабиться и улучшить настроение во время повседневных дел.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm doing chores like showering, washing dishes, or driving. It helps me feel better, reduces stress, and refreshes my mind.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности. Нужно использовать правильные местоимения и времена, а также связующие слова для плавности. Следует уточнить, что вы учились пению и почему.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing about five years ago when I was a student. I admired a female singer and wanted to sing like her, so I took singing lessons.

Gợi ý: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует чётко указать, для кого вы хотите петь, и избегать непонятных выражений. Лучше сказать, что хотите петь для семьи и друзей, чтобы доставлять им радость.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family and friends because I enjoy making them happy with my voice.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неполные предложения. Нужно использовать связные и полные предложения, объясняя, почему пение приносит радость.

Ví dụ: Sure, singing definitely brings happiness to people because it allows them to be in harmony and feel good emotionally.

× Definitely, I like singing especially when I have shower, wash dishes, clean my house and driving car.

✓ Definitely, I like singing especially when I have a shower, wash dishes, clean my house and drive a car.

The verbs in the list should be in the base form to maintain parallel structure. 'Driving' should be 'drive' to match 'have', 'wash', and 'clean'. Also, 'have shower' needs an article 'a' to be correct.

× Definitely, I like singing especially when I have shower, wash dishes, clean my house and driving car.

✓ Definitely, I like singing especially when I have a shower, wash dishes, clean my house and drive a car.

The noun 'shower' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' in this context.

× It helps me to feel better myself and the less stressed also refreshed my mind.

✓ It helps me to feel better about myself, less stressed, and also refreshes my mind.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' needs the preposition 'about' to be correct. Also, the sentence structure and verb forms need adjustment for clarity and correctness.

× Yeah, yes. It was five years ago when I was a student. I'm keen on a female singer and I wanted to sing like him and I go to the workout.

✓ Yeah, yes. It was five years ago when I was a student. I was keen on a female singer and I wanted to sing like her, so I went to the workout.

The tense should be consistent in past narrative. 'I'm keen' should be 'I was keen'. 'Like him' is incorrect because the singer is female, so 'her' is correct. 'I go' should be past tense 'I went'.

× I'm keen on a female singer and I wanted to sing like him and I go to the workout.

✓ I'm keen on a female singer and I wanted to sing like her and I go to the workout.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect for a female singer; it should be 'her'.

× I'm keen on a female singer and I wanted to sing like him and I go to the workout.

✓ I'm keen on a female singer and I wanted to sing like her and I go to the workout.

The phrase 'go to the workout' is awkward; it should be 'go to workouts' or 'go to the gym' for clarity.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I want to sing for my family and for our population.

✓ I want to sing for my family and for our community.

'Population' is not typically used to refer to a group of people in this context; 'community' is more appropriate.

× In my opinion, I have a good voice of thinking.

✓ In my opinion, I have a good singing voice.

The phrase 'voice of thinking' is incorrect and unclear; 'singing voice' is the correct expression.

× Sure, singing definitely helps people happiness because.

✓ Sure, singing definitely helps people's happiness because

The phrase 'helps people happiness' is incorrect; it should be 'helps people's happiness'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× It it is such A to be in harmony and feel good.

✓ It is such a joy to be in harmony and feel good.

The sentence is incomplete and contains errors like 'It it is such A'; it should be 'It is such a joy' to make sense.