Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте грамматических ошибок и избыточных выражений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и конкретизируйте причины вашего ответа.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because my father is a singer, and I believe I have inherited his talent. Singing is also a wonderful way to express myself and bring joy to others.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для плавности и конкретизируйте опыт обучения пению.

Ví dụ: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often sing while doing chores like washing dishes or cleaning. I started singing when I was about 11 years old, and it helps me relax and clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Уточните, почему хотите петь для отца, и используйте связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my father because he believes becoming a singer is difficult for girls. However, I want to prove him wrong by showing my talent alongside him.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более ясным и грамматически правильным. Используйте конкретные примеры и связующие слова для улучшения логики и содержания.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing is a unique personal ability. When we sing for others, it can bring them happiness and relaxation, making their day better than before.

× Yes, of course I like singing because my father is a singer and with DNA I get that able to sing and I think that it's a well action I can do for others.

✓ Yes, of course I like singing because my father is a singer and with DNA I am able to sing and I think that it's a good thing I can do for others.

The phrase 'I get that able to sing' is incorrect because 'get' is not properly used with 'able to'. The correct form is 'I am able to sing'. Also, 'well action' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'good thing' or 'good action'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Sometimes I sing when I wash dishes, when I clean the house and when I want to clean my mind for other unnecessary things and I say that it's helpful for me and I'm and 1st I am when I was 11 I sing it.

✓ Sometimes I sing when I wash dishes, when I clean the house and when I want to clear my mind of other unnecessary things and I say that it's helpful for me. At first, when I was 11, I sang.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'I want to clean my mind for other unnecessary things' should be 'I want to clear my mind of other unnecessary things'. Also, 'I am and 1st I am when I was 11 I sing it' is unclear and should be corrected to 'At first, when I was 11, I sang' to properly use past tense and clarify meaning.

× I want to sing for the my father because he's saying that I can be singer and it's a hard way that for me for girls.

✓ I want to sing for my father because he says that I can be a singer and it's a hard path for me as a girl.

The phrase 'the my father' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed before 'my father'. Also, 'he's saying' should be 'he says' for present simple tense. 'I can be singer' needs an article 'a' before 'singer'. 'It's a hard way that for me for girls' is awkward and corrected to 'it's a hard path for me as a girl' for clarity and correctness.

× But I think differently if I show my talent with my father.

✓ But I think differently; if I show my talent to my father,

The sentence is incomplete and the conjunction 'if' introduces a conditional clause that needs completion. Also, 'show my talent with my father' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to'. The sentence should be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Maybe he changed his mind.

✓ Maybe he will change his mind.

The context suggests a future possibility, so the future tense 'will change' is more appropriate than the past tense 'changed'. This aligns the verb tense with the intended meaning.

× Yes, of course, singing is that unique, you and the personal ability that someone can take them.

✓ Yes, of course, singing is unique, a personal ability that someone can have.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'Singing is that unique, you and the personal ability that someone can take them' is confusing. It should be 'singing is unique, a personal ability that someone can have' to correctly express the idea and use pronouns properly.

× And I see that if we sing it for others people, they can feel the more happiness, relaxable feelings because it's a future, future than others now.

✓ And I see that if we sing for other people, they can feel more happiness and relaxed feelings because it's a better future than others have now.

The phrase 'sing it for others people' is incorrect; 'sing for other people' is correct. 'The more happiness' should be 'more happiness'. 'Relaxable feelings' is incorrect; 'relaxed feelings' is appropriate. 'It's a future, future than others now' is unclear and corrected to 'it's a better future than others have now' for clarity and grammatical correctness.