Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some language errors and redundancy. Try to use correct vocabulary ('suggests' should be 'stress') and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions. Usually, I prefer singing alone rather than performing in front of others, as it feels more relaxing.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some repetition. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, try to organise your answer clearly with a topic sentence followed by supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I have never learnt singing formally by attending classes or receiving professional guidance. However, I have picked up some useful tips from short videos on social media, which have helped me improve a little.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but contains hesitations and some awkward phrasing. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use correct pronouns and prepositions, and organise your answer with linking words to make it more fluent and natural.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my dog because, regardless of how good or bad my singing is, I believe my dog always appreciates my voice. In fact, he is a great companion and a patient listener.

Gợi ý: There are several language errors and unclear phrases in your answer. For example, 'seeing' should be 'singing', and 'laziness' is incorrect here. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness to both the singer and the listeners because it allows people to express their feelings and share positive energy. Especially during difficult times, singing can be a wonderful way to lift one's mood and find comfort.

× Yes, I love singing songs because it's a wonderful way for me to release my suggests and also express my emotions.

✓ Yes, I love singing songs because it's a wonderful way for me to release my stresses and also express my emotions.

The word 'suggests' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'stresses' which means mental or emotional strain. Using the correct quantifier or noun is important for clarity.

× But most of the time I ran I sing a song alone instead of singing to others.

✓ But most of the time I sing a song alone instead of singing to others.

The phrase 'I ran I sing' is incorrect and disrupts sentence structure. Removing 'ran' corrects the sentence and maintains proper tense and meaning.

× I've never been learnt how to sing in a formal way, like attending any classes and receive any professional guidance from teachers, but I do pick up picked up some useful hints from the short short videos of the of the social media.

✓ I've never learnt how to sing in a formal way, like attending any classes and receiving any professional guidance from teachers, but I have picked up some useful hints from short videos on social media.

The phrase 'been learnt' is incorrect; 'learnt' is the past participle and does not require 'been'. Also, 'receive' should be 'receiving' to match the gerund form after 'like'. 'Do pick up picked up' is redundant; 'have picked up' is correct for past experience. 'Short short videos of the of the social media' is repetitive and incorrect; 'short videos on social media' is appropriate.

× Umm, I want to sing for my pets, my dog, because I think, uh, no matter how, how good or bad, I think my dog will always appreciate for my voice.

✓ Umm, I want to sing for my pet, my dog, because I think, no matter how good or bad, my dog will always appreciate my voice.

'Pets' should be singular 'pet' since only one dog is mentioned. 'Appreciate for my voice' is incorrect; 'appreciate my voice' is the correct usage without 'for'.

× So I think she, he is a quite good company, uh, quite good audience and listener.

✓ So I think he is quite good company, a quite good audience and listener.

The pronouns 'she, he' are confusing; since the dog is male, 'he' is correct. 'A quite good company' is correct with the article 'a'. Also, 'company' is uncountable here and does not need 'a' before it, so 'quite good company' is correct.

× Of course, seeing can bring happiness to both the singer and the laziness because it's a wonderful way for people to express their feelings and convey some power.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to both the singer and the listener because it's a wonderful way for people to express their feelings and convey some power.

'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. 'Laziness' is incorrect; the intended word is 'listener'. Correct pronouns and nouns are essential for meaning.

× You know, especially when people are in their difficult times period, seeing can be a wonderful.

✓ You know, especially when people are in their difficult times, singing can be wonderful.

'Difficult times period' is redundant; 'difficult times' suffices. 'Seeing' should be 'singing'. The sentence was incomplete; removing 'a' before 'wonderful' corrects the structure.