Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress when I feel overwhelmed. Singing makes me feel calm and happy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本完整，但表达不够流畅，语法和用词有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn by listening to music and practicing with my friends. I believe that practicing regularly helps me improve.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并注意代词和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents. I would choose happy and memorable songs to show my gratitude and love for them.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，使用恰当的连接词，使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because songs come in many styles, like happy or romantic ones. Listening to beautiful music can make people feel joyful.

× I think singing can make me feel relax.

✓ I think singing can make me feel relaxed.

这里'relax'是形容词，表示放松的状态，应该用过去分词'relaxed'来修饰感受。

× Sometimes I had too much on my plate so I feel really frustrated and exhausted that time when I sing.

✓ Sometimes I have too much on my plate so I feel really frustrated and exhausted at that time when I sing.

句子中描述的是现在的情况，'had'应改为现在时'have'，'that time'应改为'at that time'表示特定时间点。

× I just can lose an art and alleviate stress.

✓ I can just lose myself in art and alleviate stress.

原句结构混乱，'lose an art'不合适，正确表达是'lose myself in art'表示沉浸于艺术中。

× I think repeat the singing can make progress.

✓ I think repeating singing can make progress.

动词'repeat'后应接动名词形式'repeating'，表示持续的动作。

× There are many people that want to sing a song for him or her, for example, my parents.

✓ There are many people for whom I want to sing a song, for example, my parents.

原句中'people that want to sing a song for him or her'表达不清，应该明确主语和宾语关系，使用'for whom I want to sing'更准确。

× I want to sing some excited and memorable songs to them to express my grateful to her to my family.

✓ I want to sing some exciting and memorable songs to them to express my gratitude to my family.

'excited'是形容人的情绪，形容词应为'exciting'表示令人兴奋的；'grateful'是形容词，名词形式应为'gratitude'。

× Yes, of course singing has songs have many kinds of styles, for example, some about happiness, about romantic, and I think many of the songs can bring happiness to people and it is a good way to let them hear the beautiful.

✓ Yes, of course singing has many kinds of songs and styles, for example, some about happiness, some about romance, and I think many of the songs can bring happiness to people and it is a good way to let them hear the beauty.

原句中'songs have many kinds of styles'结构错误，应改为'singing has many kinds of songs and styles'；'about romantic'应为'about romance'；'hear the beautiful'应为'hear the beauty'。