Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时时态使用不准确，且表达略显重复。建议使用现在时态描述习惯性动作，避免冗余，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel comfortable. Singing is one of my hobbies, and I especially like performing R&B songs because of their smooth rhythms.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态和连贯句式，清晰表达学习方式。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons. However, I often listen to songs repeatedly and learn to sing their melodies by myself.

Gợi ý: 时态混用和语法错误影响表达清晰度。建议统一时态，简洁表达个人感受，并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing for others because it makes me feel nervous and uncomfortable. Instead, I prefer singing to myself, especially when I'm taking a shower.

Gợi ý: 表达较为清晰，但部分句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Songs with strong melodies and cheerful rhythms often lift people's spirits and make them feel happier. In this way, music acts as a great motivator.

× When I was singing, it makes me feel relaxing and comfortable.

✓ When I sing, it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

这里时态不一致，前半句用过去进行时，后半句用一般现在时，应该统一用一般现在时表达习惯性动作。此外，'relaxing'是形容词，表示使人放松的，应该用过去分词'relaxed'表示感受。

× But actually I usually listen the songs for many times and then I just can sing this song melody.

✓ But actually I usually listen to the songs many times and then I can just sing the melody of the song.

动词'listen'后面需要介词'to'，'listen the songs'应改为'listen to the songs'。'for many times'表达不正确，应该用'many times'。'sing this song melody'表达不自然，改为'sing the melody of the song'更合适。

× I just like to singing when I was taking shower because if I sing to others I will feel uncomfortable and nervous.

✓ I just like singing when I am taking a shower because if I sing to others I will feel uncomfortable and nervous.

动词'like'后面接动词时，应该用动名词形式'singing'，而不是不定式加-ing。'when I was taking shower'时态和冠词使用不当，改为一般现在时和加冠词'a shower'。

× I just like to singing when I was taking shower because if I sing to others I will feel uncomfortable and nervous.

✓ I just like singing when I am taking a shower because if I sing to others I will feel uncomfortable and nervous.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时而非过去进行时。

× But actually I usually listen the songs for many times and then I just can sing this song melody.

✓ But actually I usually listen to the songs many times and then I can just sing the melody of the song.

动词'listen'后面需要介词'to'，'listen the songs'应改为'listen to the songs'。

× Those songs which have strong melody and happy rhythm will bring people feel happier.

✓ Those songs which have a strong melody and a happy rhythm will make people feel happier.

'bring people feel'结构不正确，应该用'make people feel'。此外，'melody'和'rhythm'前需要冠词'a'。