Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然，存在重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I have loved music since childhood. I learned to play instruments and sing, which makes singing very enjoyable for me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意句子结构的清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing in junior high school. It helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. Also, I enjoy singing with friends at gatherings.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和未完成的句子，建议避免重复，完整表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

Ví dụ: I really want to sing for my family because they have always supported my musical dreams. Singing for them helps strengthen our emotional bond.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的表达，避免口语化词汇，句子结构要完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness. It allows people to express their emotions. Moreover, singing karaoke with friends and writing lyrics can be very enjoyable.

× I learn how to play instrument and how to sing a good song in my childhood.

✓ I learned how to play an instrument and how to sing a good song in my childhood.

这里描述的是过去的经历，应该使用过去时态。并且“instrument”前需要加不定冠词“an”。

× I learn how to play instrument and how to sing a good song in my childhood.

✓ I learned how to play an instrument and how to sing a good song in my childhood.

“instrument”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词“an”。

× I learned how to sing in my junior high school and also I think it's a good way to express my emotions and relieve my stress or pressure and also I can sing with my friend in the gatherings.

✓ I learned how to sing in my junior high school and also I think it's a good way to express my emotions and relieve my stress or pressure. Also, I can sing with my friends in gatherings.

“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为通常是和多个朋友一起唱歌；“gatherings”前不需要加定冠词“the”。另外，句子较长，适当断句更清晰。

× I can sing with my friend in the gatherings.

✓ I can sing with my friends in gatherings.

“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，表示和多个朋友一起；“gatherings”前不需要加定冠词“the”。

× I extremely want to sing for my family because they they have always been my biggest fan.

✓ I really want to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest fans.

“extremely”用法不当，改为“really”更自然；“they”重复；“fan”应为复数“fans”，因为指代家人多于一个。

× They always support me to pursue my music dream and also I think it's a good way to to improve our emotion and.

✓ They always support me in pursuing my music dream, and also I think it's a good way to improve our emotions.

“support me to pursue”应改为“support me in pursuing”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”；句子末尾不完整，去掉多余“and”。

× Also we can sing some beautiful songs in karaoke with friends and we can also to write down some lyrics and result.

✓ Also, we can sing some beautiful songs at karaoke with friends, and we can also write down some lyrics and results.

“in karaoke”应改为“at karaoke”；“can also to write”中“to”多余，应去掉；“result”应为复数“results”。