Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it relaxes me and I like learning techniques to sing melodiously in my free time.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Adding linking words can also help.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing in primary school, where my teacher explained how different basic tones combine to create pleasant sounds.

Gợi ý: Your answer is creative and specific, which is good. However, try to connect your ideas more smoothly using linking words and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I would love to sing for nature because it amazes me, especially phenomena like rainbows. I want to write a poem about it and sing it melodiously.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer explanations. Avoid vague phrases like "different dimension" and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel more positive.

× Yes, I do like singing and whenever I find my leisure time, I always try to sing the songs fluently and I enjoy learning the techniques to sing in a melodious tone.

✓ Yes, I do like singing and whenever I find my leisure time, I always try to sing songs fluently and I enjoy learning the techniques to sing in a melodious tone.

The phrase 'sing the songs' is incorrect because 'songs' is a general plural noun here and does not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× I studied how to sing in my primary school and there one of my teacher had shown how the different basic tones makes the ultimate sound that pleases human ears.

✓ I studied how to sing in my primary school and there one of my teachers had shown how the different basic tones make the ultimate sound that pleases human ears.

The word 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because it refers to one among multiple teachers. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'tones'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and pluralization errors.

× I would love to sing for nature as it always amazes me, for example how rainbow appears to humans.

✓ I would love to sing for nature as it always amazes me, for example how a rainbow appears to humans.

The noun 'rainbow' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. This correction fixes the article usage error.

× Singing can trigger your emotions, whether it's happiness or it's anger.

✓ Singing can trigger your emotions, whether it's happiness or anger.

The phrase 'it's anger' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' and is unnecessary here. Removing 'it's' before 'anger' makes the sentence grammatically correct and more natural.