Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки, например, "dancing along with with my fingers" звучит неестественно. Постарайтесь использовать более точные выражения и избегать излишних повторов. Также старайтесь строить предложения более связно и логично, используя связующие слова.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me concentrate better. For example, I often listen to my favorite songs while working or driving, which improves my mood and focus.

Gợi ý: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки, например, "have the good quality in my singing" и незавершённые мысли. Рекомендуется строить предложения более чётко, избегать лишних слов и завершать мысли. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have completed music school and improved my singing skills. I enjoy singing along with popular singers from my country as well as English-speaking artists.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки, например, "sing for my kids and also for my own". Постарайтесь выражать мысли яснее и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my children and myself because singing helps me cope with stressful situations at work. Moreover, it is a great way to connect with others.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторения и незавершённые мысли, например, "it also makes you". Рекомендуется строить предложения более полно и использовать конкретные примеры с логическими связками.

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness by helping people cope with difficult times. For instance, singing with friends around a fireplace creates a warm and romantic atmosphere.

× I also like dancing along with with my fingers.

✓ I also like dancing along with my fingers.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'with with', which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'with' corrects the sentence.

× It helps me to concentrate faster and do work without.

✓ It helps me to concentrate faster and work without distractions.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'do work without' lacking an object, making it incomplete. Adding 'distractions' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× Yes, I finished my music school and have the good quality in my singing.

✓ Yes, I finished my music school and have good quality in my singing.

The phrase 'the good quality' is incorrect because 'quality' is uncountable here and does not need 'the'. Removing 'the' corrects the article usage.

× I like singing along with the most popular singers in my country and also in the foreign countries that use English as their native.

✓ I like singing along with the most popular singers in my country and also in foreign countries where English is their native language.

The phrase 'in the foreign countries' is incorrect because 'foreign countries' is used generally without 'the'. Also, 'that use English as their native' is incomplete; 'where English is their native language' is more appropriate.

× I don't think so. I am quite well singing along but.

✓ I don't think so. I am quite good at singing along, though.

The phrase 'I am quite well singing along but' is ungrammatical. 'Well' should be replaced with 'good at' to describe ability, and 'but' should be replaced with 'though' to complete the thought.

× I would like to sing for my kids and also for my own.

✓ I would like to sing for my kids and also for my own family.

The phrase 'for my own' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'family' clarifies the meaning.

× It helps me to survive in the very difficult situations when the pressure from from my colleagues sometimes can be so hard.

✓ It helps me to survive very difficult situations when the pressure from my colleagues can sometimes be so hard.

The phrase 'in the very difficult situations' is better as 'very difficult situations' without 'in the'. Also, 'from from' is a repeated word and should be corrected to a single 'from'. The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed after 'can'.

× And singing along brings a very good way to communicate.

✓ And singing along provides a very good way to communicate.

The phrase 'brings a very good way' is awkward. Using 'provides' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Yes, and in the very different situation, it helps them to survive and to cope with the very, very difficult situation.

✓ Yes, and in very different situations, it helps them to survive and cope with very, very difficult situations.

The phrase 'in the very different situation' is incorrect; it should be plural 'situations' without 'the'. Also, 'to cope with the very, very difficult situation' should be plural to match the context.

× Also, it brings romance feelings.

✓ Also, it brings romantic feelings.

The adjective 'romance' is incorrect here; the correct adjective form is 'romantic' to describe 'feelings'.

× For example, if you sing with your friends around the fireplace, it also makes you.

✓ For example, if you sing with your friends around the fireplace, it also makes you feel happy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'it also makes you' lacking an object or complement. Adding 'feel happy' completes the sentence meaningfully.