Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意主谓一致。可以先直接回答喜欢唱歌，然后简要说明原因，最后举例说明喜欢的歌手。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it plays an important role in my daily life. For example, I admire singers like Rihanna, Ariana Grande, and Nicki Minaj, and I hope to be like them one day.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，存在语法错误。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，然后说明学习方式，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching many online singing tutorials on my phone. I also practice by writing notes in my notebook to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议先明确回答想为谁唱歌，然后简要说明原因，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for many people, especially my mother, because she means a lot to me. I also hope to perform for my excellent singing tutor to show my progress.

Gợi ý: 回答中有发音和语法错误，表达重复且不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并给出具体理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music helps people relax and enjoy themselves. If I can sing well, I would love to sing songs for everyone to make them happy.

× I love singing very much because I think singing is an is play an important part of of my daily life.

✓ I love singing very much because I think singing plays an important part of my daily life.

句子中'singing is an is play'结构错误，应该用第三人称单数动词形式'plays'来表达'singing'作为主语的动作。'of of'是重复，应去掉一个。

× I just want to looks like her.

✓ I just want to look like her.

动词不定式后应使用动词原形，'looks'是第三人称单数形式，不适用于不定式结构，应改为'look'。

× I haven't learned how to think in my own in my in my phone as as in write a notebook.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing on my own, on my phone or in a notebook.

原句中'think'应为'sing'，且表达不清晰，需调整为正确的动词和表达方式。

× And there are so many different kinds of how to stay teaching singing videos and I like to follow them.

✓ And there are so many different kinds of singing teaching videos, and I like to follow them.

'how to stay teaching'结构不正确，应改为'singing teaching'来表达教学视频的内容。

× I want to think for many people.

✓ I want to sing for many people.

'think'应为'sing'，且动词拼写错误。

× So I firstly I want to think for a very excellent tutor and I want to be AI want to be a excellent singer and the most the most people I want to see is my mother.

✓ So firstly, I want to sing for a very excellent tutor, and I want to be an excellent singer. The person I want to see the most is my mother.

'think'应为'sing'，'a excellent'应为'an excellent'，句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整顺序。

× I want to sing songs for her because.

✓ I want to sing songs for her because she means a lot to me.

句子不完整，缺少原因部分，需补充完整表达。

× Seeing can always bring bringing happiness and pleasure to all people.

✓ Singing can always bring happiness and pleasure to all people.

'Seeing'应为'Singing'，'bring bringing'重复，应去掉一个。

× I mean, people all love listening music, listening to music.

✓ I mean, people all love listening to music.

'listening music'缺少介词'to'，正确表达为'listening to music'。

× So I think seeing it, if I can sing it, I can sing. I will sing every every song for every.

✓ So I think singing, if I can sing, I will sing every song for everyone.

句子结构混乱，'seeing it'应为'singing'，'every every song for every'不完整，需补充完整。