Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Singing makes me feel happy and calm.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“I'm not”用法错误，且“sewing techniques”与唱歌无关。建议直接回答问题并清晰表达学习唱歌的经历。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned singing formally. I tried to learn online, but it's not as effective as having a teacher.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了想为自己和朋友唱歌的想法，但句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议使用更清晰的句子表达原因，并注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for myself and my friends because singing helps us relieve stress and feel better when we are unwell.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如“Seeing”应为“Singing”，“St. singers”表达不清。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When people feel sad, singing can cheer them up. Many street singers perform to bring joy to others.

× Yes I do because singing can make me relaxed and release my releases, my stress and I am happy when I am singing.

✓ Yes, I do because singing can make me relaxed and release my stress, and I am happy when I sing.

这里的'release my releases'是不正确的表达，应改为'release my stress'。另外，'when I am singing'可以简化为'when I sing'，更符合习惯用法。动词形式要正确使用动名词和一般现在时。

× No, I'm not. So I'm always stuck in the sewing techniques and I try to learn how to sing online but it is not efficient as you have a teacher to teach you how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't. So I'm always stuck with the singing techniques and I try to learn how to sing online but it is not as efficient as having a teacher to teach you how to sing.

'No, I'm not'回答不符合语境，应该用'No, I haven't'表示没有学过。'stuck in the sewing techniques'应为'stuck with the singing techniques'，'sewing'是缝纫，语义错误。'not efficient as you have'应为'not as efficient as having'，比较结构错误。

× I want to sing for me and my friends. It's a good way to release your stress so when I'm sick I feel happy and there's an any difficulties is out of my mind.

✓ I want to sing for myself and my friends. It's a good way to release your stress, so when I'm sick I feel happy and any difficulties are out of my mind.

'sing for me'应为'sing for myself'，反身代词使用错误。'there's an any difficulties is out of my mind'结构混乱，应改为'any difficulties are out of my mind'，主谓一致和冠词使用错误。

× When other people feel upset or sad, you can sing for them to cheer them up and sing.

✓ When other people feel upset or sad, you can sing to them to cheer them up.

'sing for them to cheer them up and sing'表达重复且不自然，应改为'sing to them to cheer them up'，介词使用更准确。

× Seeing is quite a powerful thing and many St. singers sing at the streets. They bring people a lot of joy.

✓ Singing is quite a powerful thing and many street singers sing on the streets. They bring people a lot of joy.

'Seeing'应为'Singing'，拼写错误。'St. singers'应为'street singers'，缩写不当。'at the streets'应为'on the streets'，介词使用错误。