Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains unclear phrasing such as "Thinking is the kind of way to release myself." To improve, try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid awkward expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, you could say: "Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress."

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors, and some sentences are unclear or repetitive. To improve, focus on clear and correct sentence structures, avoid repetition, and use appropriate vocabulary. For example, you could say: "No, I have never taken singing lessons because I believe singing is a natural ability. I sing just for fun and don't aim to be professional."

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I believe singing is a natural ability. I sing just for fun and don't aim to be professional.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. To improve, try to organise your thoughts before speaking and use simple, clear sentences. For example, you could say: "I'm not sure, but probably I would sing for myself because I enjoy listening to my own singing."

Ví dụ: I'm not sure, but probably I would sing for myself because I enjoy listening to my own singing.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but the grammar and vocabulary need improvement. To improve, use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. For example, you could say: "Absolutely. Research shows that music can improve people's emotional health, so singing is a good way to make people happy."

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Research shows that music can improve people's emotional health, so singing is a good way to make people happy.

× Thinking is the kind of way to release myself.

✓ Thinking is a kind of way to release myself.

The phrase 'the kind of way' is incorrect here; it should be 'a kind of way' because 'kind' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a' when used in this context.

× No, I've never learned about it because I think seeing is just a people's nature.

✓ No, I've never learned about it because I think singing is just people's nature.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'singing' to match the topic. Also, 'a people's nature' is incorrect; 'people's nature' without 'a' is correct because 'people's' is a possessive plural noun.

× We every, everyone can sing without learning.

✓ Everyone can sing without learning.

The phrase 'We every, everyone' is redundant and incorrect. 'Everyone' alone is sufficient as a singular indefinite pronoun referring to all people.

× Maybe I'll sing for myself because I because and maybe I like to listen music and and so I must like to listen my listening made by myself.

✓ Maybe I'll sing for myself because I like to listen to music, and I must like to listen to my own singing.

The sentence has several pronoun and preposition errors. 'Listen music' should be 'listen to music'. 'My listening made by myself' is awkward; it should be 'my own singing'. Also, unnecessary repetition and filler words were removed for clarity.

× I think the the singing is good way to help people be happy.

✓ I think singing is a good way to help people be happy.

The phrase 'the the singing' has a repeated article; one 'the' should be removed. Also, 'good way' requires an article 'a' before it. The preposition 'to help people be happy' is correct.