Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Hãy tập trung vào việc trình bày ý chính rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp lại không cần thiết.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me enjoy music and improve my English. For example, I often sing English songs to practice pronunciation and learn new vocabulary, which is more enjoyable than doing homework.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'have ever learnt' hay 'learn to how'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. First, I learned to feel the lyrics and keep harmony with the beat. It was interesting and helped me relax. For example, I practiced singing English songs clearly.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

Ví dụ: I want to sing with my friends because we both love music, especially English songs. On weekends, we usually go to a coffee shop to practice songs by Taylor Swift. This helps us relax and improve our English skills.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it improves people's mood and helps them forget daily stress. For example, after singing, I often feel more relaxed and energetic.

× It's a tools for me to study English.

✓ It's a tool for me to study English.

The word 'tools' is plural, but it is preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct singular form is 'tool' to match the article 'a'.

× 2 hours, rhythms, lyrics and beat.

✓ I spend 2 hours practicing rhythms, lyrics, and beat.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb and clear structure. Adding a subject and verb clarifies the meaning and forms a complete sentence.

× I think it's a good choice for me to study English better than do homework.

✓ I think it's a better choice for me to study English than to do homework.

The phrase 'better than do homework' is incorrect. The correct comparative structure is 'better than to do homework'. Also, 'a good choice' should be modified to 'a better choice' to reflect comparison.

× Yes, I have ever learnt how to think.

✓ Yes, I have learnt how to sing.

The phrase 'have ever learnt' is incorrect; 'ever' is not used in affirmative present perfect sentences. Also, 'how to think' is likely a mistake for 'how to sing'. The verb 'learnt' is correct in present perfect tense here.

× Firstly I learn to how to feel the lyrics and in harmony we beat.

✓ Firstly, I learn how to feel the lyrics and keep harmony with the beat.

The phrase 'to how to feel' is incorrect; it should be 'learn how to feel'. Also, 'in harmony we beat' is unclear; rephrasing to 'keep harmony with the beat' improves clarity.

× I think it's so interesting for me to relax and I learned how to sing clearly and is for example is English songs.

✓ I think it's very interesting for me to relax, and I learned how to sing clearly, for example, English songs.

The sentence is run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Adding commas and conjunctions improves readability. 'Is for example is English songs' is incorrect; rephrased to 'for example, English songs'.

× Well, I want to sing with my friends because both she and I love music, especially English songs.

✓ Well, I want to sing with my friends because both they and I love music, especially English songs.

The pronoun 'she' is singular, but 'friends' is plural. The correct pronoun to refer to multiple friends is 'they'.

× In the weekend, we usually go to a coffee to practice English songs by Taylor Swift and I think it's a good choice for us to relax and study English and improve.

✓ On the weekend, we usually go to a coffee shop to practice English songs by Taylor Swift, and I think it's a good choice for us to relax, study English, and improve.

The correct preposition for time is 'on the weekend', not 'in the weekend'. Also, 'go to a coffee' is incomplete; it should be 'go to a coffee shop'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, I believe that singing can bring happiness to individuals because it improve the mood of the day and they feel happy throughout the day and forget your daily stress and I think it's a great way to forget tiredness.

✓ Yes, I believe that singing can bring happiness to individuals because it improves the mood of the day, and they feel happy throughout the day and forget their daily stress. I think it's a great way to forget tiredness.

The verb 'improve' should be in third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'your daily stress' should be 'their daily stress' to maintain consistent pronouns.