Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like "it is my favorite topic" which sound unnatural. Also, watch for grammar errors such as "allow me" which should be "allows me." Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it lifts my mood and gives me energy. Moreover, it helps me express my emotions in a meaningful way, which I find very satisfying.

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative and mostly clear, but there are some grammar mistakes such as "experience" should be plural "experiences" and "persuaded" should be "pursued." Also, try to use linking words like "however" or "but" to improve coherence. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I have never taken formal singing classes; however, during school, we had extra music lessons where teachers taught us basic singing skills. These experiences sparked my interest in singing, although I haven't pursued it further.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is affected by hesitation and some grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like "uh" and use correct phrases such as "my loved ones" instead of "my loving one." Also, use plural forms correctly, e.g., "baby rhymes" should be "nursery rhymes." Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: Although I'm not a professional singer, I enjoy singing for my loved ones. For example, when my baby was one and a half years old, I used to sing nursery rhymes to help him fall asleep.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes, such as "express feeling" should be "express feelings" and "raise stress" should be "reduce stress." Also, the phrase "and their free time" is unclear. Use linking words like "for instance" to improve coherence and be more specific in your examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and reduce stress. For instance, many of my friends enjoy singing in their free time, and they say it helps them feel more joyful and relaxed.

× Additionally, singing has a strong connection with my emotions, allow me to express how I feel in a meaningful way.

✓ Additionally, singing has a strong connection with my emotions, allowing me to express how I feel in a meaningful way.

The verb 'allow' should be in the present participle form 'allowing' to correctly link the two clauses and indicate that singing enables the expression of feelings.

× I think those early experience sparked my interest in singing, even though I have not persuaded further.

✓ I think those early experiences sparked my interest in singing, even though I have not pursued it further.

The noun 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to agree with 'those' which refers to multiple instances. Also, 'persuaded' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'pursued' meaning to continue or follow up.

× I think those early experience sparked my interest in singing, even though I have not persuaded further.

✓ I think those early experiences sparked my interest in singing, even though I have not pursued it further.

The verb 'persuaded' is incorrectly used; the correct past participle is 'pursued' to indicate continuing an activity. Also, 'have not pursued further' needs the object 'it' to clarify what was not pursued.

× Singing is not my passion and I'm not a professional singer, but uh, for my loving one, uh, for my dear ones, I always like to sing song.

✓ Singing is not my passion and I'm not a professional singer, but uh, for my loving one, uh, for my dear ones, I always like to sing songs.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple instances of singing for loved ones.

× I remember that uh, when my baby is 1 1/2, I sing a baby rhymes for him, which helps him to sleep faster.

✓ I remember that uh, when my baby was 1 1/2, I sang baby rhymes for him, which helped him to sleep faster.

The verb tense should be past ('was' and 'sang') to match the past time reference. Also, 'a baby rhymes' is incorrect; 'baby rhymes' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it is a great way to express feeling and raise stress.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it is a great way to express feelings and reduce stress.

The noun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to refer generally to emotions. The verb 'raise' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'reduce' to indicate lowering stress.

× For example, many of my friends enjoy singing and their free time, and they say it's helped them feel more joyful and relaxed.

✓ For example, many of my friends enjoy singing in their free time, and they say it's helped them feel more joyful and relaxed.

The preposition 'in' is needed before 'their free time' to correctly express when they enjoy singing.