Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“seeing lover”应为“singing lover”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇和语法，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Whenever I feel pressured, singing allows me to unwind and feel happier. I believe singing is a cultural way for people to relax and enjoy themselves.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“didn't get any learning skills which is very professional”不合适。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确表达没有正式学习过唱歌，但通过模仿音乐自学。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned singing professionally. I usually listen to music and try to imitate the rhythm by myself. Although I am not very good, I find this method quite effective for improving my singing.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了想为家人和朋友唱歌的想法，但用词不当且句子不完整，如“circles of my darlings”和结尾不完整。建议使用更自然的表达，完整句子，并避免口语填充词。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family and friends because singing helps strengthen our relationships. Therefore, I think I should practice singing more to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了唱歌带来快乐的观点，但句子重复且不连贯，如“learn a lot”重复，且“relaxed way for people to copy”表达不清。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，使用恰当的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I feel sad, I listen to my favorite songs and try to sing along, which helps me feel better and more relaxed.

× I would like to call myself a seeing lover because when I sing I can unwind myself which is a very relaxed experience.

✓ I would like to call myself a singing lover because when I sing I can unwind myself which is a very relaxing experience.

这里'seeing lover'是拼写错误，应该是'singing lover'，表示喜欢唱歌的人；'a very relaxed experience'应改为'a very relaxing experience'，因为这里需要形容词形式来描述体验的性质。

× So even I I think singing is a very cultural way for people to relax.

✓ So even I think singing is a very cultural way for people to relax.

句子中出现了重复的'I'，属于代词使用错误，应删除多余的'I'。

× I didn't get any learning skills which is very professional in singing.

✓ I haven't learned any professional singing skills.

原句中'didn't get'用法不当，且'which is very professional in singing'表达不清，应改为'haven't learned any professional singing skills'，更符合现在完成时表达经验的用法。

× Most of my time I just listen to music and copy the rhythm by myself.

✓ Most of the time I just listen to music and copy the rhythm by myself.

'Most of my time'应改为'Most of the time'，这里需要使用固定搭配表达大部分时间。

× Even though I think it's sounds not pretty good but it's actually a very effective.

✓ Even though I think it doesn't sound very good, it's actually very effective.

'it's sounds'是主谓不一致，应改为'it doesn't sound'；'not pretty good'表达不地道，应改为'not very good'；'a very effective'缺少名词，应改为'very effective'。

× I want to sing for my family as well as my friends because I think singing is a very important way to connect and enhance the relationships between those important, uh, circles of my darlings.

✓ I want to sing for my family as well as my friends because I think singing is a very important way to connect and enhance the relationships among those important circles of my loved ones.

'between'用于两者之间，'among'用于三者或以上；'circles of my darlings'表达不自然，改为'circles of my loved ones'更合适。

× Therefore, I think I should practice singing to.

✓ Therefore, I think I should practice singing too.

'to'用错，应为副词'too'表示'也'。

× When I feel I want to cry, I always listen to the music, which is my favorite ones, and then I just try to sing by myself without any reason.

✓ When I feel like I want to cry, I always listen to music, which are my favorite songs, and then I just try to sing by myself without any reason.

'feel I want to cry'缺少连接词，应为'feel like I want to cry'；'the music, which is my favorite ones'主谓不一致，应改为'music, which are my favorite songs'。

× I think it's a very relaxed way, relaxing way for people to copy.

✓ I think it's a very relaxing way for people to relax.

'a very relaxed way, relaxing way'重复且用词不当，应改为'a very relaxing way'；'to copy'用词错误，应为'relax'。