Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding a reason with linking words. Avoid repeating similar phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned singing as a child because there was a music teacher named X in my community, and I used to attend his classes regularly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the response more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid abrupt sentences.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my mother, who passed away in 2010 due to kidney disease. Singing helps me remember her and express how much I miss her.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to use linking words and clearer sentence structures to express your ideas more effectively.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because songs often remind us of happy memories from our childhood, which makes us feel nostalgic and joyful.

× Yes, I like singing when in my leisure time, when I was free, I like to sing a song whichever I like the most.

✓ Yes, I like singing in my leisure time; when I am free, I like to sing a song that I like the most.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'When I was free' should be 'when I am free' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'whichever' is incorrectly used; 'that' is appropriate here.

× Yes. When I was a child, I used to learn music because in my society there was a teacher. His name is X and he is a music teacher. He was a music teacher. So I usually go. I went.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I used to learn music because there was a teacher in my community. His name was X and he was a music teacher. So I usually went to him.

The sentence has inconsistent tense usage. 'His name is' should be 'His name was' to match past context. 'I usually go' should be 'I usually went' to maintain past tense. Also, 'in my society' is better expressed as 'in my community'.

× Yes, I want to sing a song for my mom. She was died in 2010 because she was suffering from kidney disease so I missed her a lot.

✓ Yes, I want to sing a song for my mom. She died in 2010 because she was suffering from kidney disease, so I miss her a lot.

'She was died' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'She died'. Also, 'I missed her a lot' should be 'I miss her a lot' to express ongoing feeling.

× That's why I sing a song for her.

✓ That's why I sing songs for her.

The sentence should use plural 'songs' to express the general action. Also, present tense 'sing' is appropriate here.

× Yes, maybe because some songs are relatable to our memory and some are nostalgic.

✓ Yes, maybe because some songs relate to our memories and some are nostalgic.

'Are relatable to our memory' is awkward; 'relate to our memories' is clearer. Also, 'memory' should be plural 'memories' to match context.

× So whenever we hear a song, what we hear in our childhood, that will remind us.

✓ So whenever we hear a song that we heard in our childhood, it reminds us.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What we hear in our childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'that we heard in our childhood'. Also, 'that will remind us' is better as 'it reminds us' for clarity and tense consistency.