Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. For example, use 'when I was a child' instead of 'when I was child' and 'my vocal cords are not very suitable' instead of 'my vocal cord are not that much suitable'. Also, avoid redundancy and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it produces pleasant and soothing music. Although my vocal cords are not very suitable for singing, I used to sing a lot when I was a child. Whenever I sing, I feel as if I am flying in the sky.

Gợi ý: Try to make your sentences clearer and more connected. For example, combine short sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, correct grammar such as 'get opportunity' to 'get the opportunity' and 'motivate us for study' to 'motivate us to study'.

Ví dụ: I really wish I had the opportunity to learn how to sing, but I was unable to do so because my parents usually focused on academics. They always motivated us to study rather than participate in extracurricular activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Avoid repeating phrases like 'sing a song'. Also, clarify 'appreciate my hard work and daddy'—perhaps you meant 'my hard work and my father'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance to sing, I would love to sing for myself. I would dedicate a pleasant song to reflect on my journey from childhood to where I am now. This song would motivate me and help me appreciate my hard work and my father's support.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence flow. For example, use 'has a direct relationship with' and 'our moods are sad'. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'therefore' to conclude your opinion.

Ví dụ: Of course, singing has a direct relationship with our happiness. Whenever we feel sad or unwell, listening to a beautiful song with pleasant and soothing music can automatically lift our mood. Therefore, I believe that singing can bring happiness to people.

× I used to sing a lot when I was child.

✓ I used to sing a lot when I was a child.

The noun 'child' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. In English, singular countable nouns must have an article or determiner.

× Even though my vocal cord are not that much suitable for singing, I love singing because of its pleasant and soothing music.

✓ Even though my vocal cords are not that much suitable for singing, I love singing because of its pleasant and soothing music.

The noun 'vocal cord' should be plural 'vocal cords' because humans have two vocal cords. The verb 'are' correctly agrees with the plural noun.

× Whenever I sing a song, I feel like that I am flying on the sky.

✓ Whenever I sing a song, I feel like I am flying in the sky.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to being in the sky; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'feel like that I am' is awkward; 'feel like I am' is correct.

× I really wish that I could get opportunity to learn how to sing a song, but I was unable to do so because my parents are typically focused on teaching.

✓ I really wish that I could get the opportunity to learn how to sing a song, but I was unable to do so because my parents were typically focused on teaching.

The phrase 'get opportunity' needs the definite article 'the' before 'opportunity'. Also, since the focus was in the past, 'are' should be changed to past tense 'were' to maintain tense consistency.

× They always motivate us for study rather than other extracurricular things.

✓ They always motivate us to study rather than other extracurricular activities.

The verb 'motivate' is followed by the preposition 'to' plus the base verb, so 'motivate us to study' is correct. Also, 'extracurricular things' is better expressed as 'extracurricular activities'.

× If I got a chance to sing a song, I would really love to sing a song for myself.

✓ If I got a chance to sing a song, I would really love to sing a song for myself.

This sentence is grammatically correct as a second conditional sentence expressing a hypothetical situation, so no correction is needed.

× I would like to dedicate a a pleasant song for the journey I have taken since from my childhood and the place where I am now.

✓ I would like to dedicate a pleasant song to the journey I have taken since my childhood and the place where I am now.

There is a repeated article 'a a' which should be corrected to a single 'a'. Also, the preposition 'for' should be 'to' when dedicating a song. The phrase 'since from my childhood' is incorrect; 'since my childhood' is correct.

× This song would help me to motivate myself and appreciate my hard work and daddy.

✓ This song would help me to motivate myself and appreciate my hard work and my dad.

The word 'daddy' is informal and does not fit well here; 'my dad' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence structure suggests 'my hard work and my dad' as two things to appreciate.

× Whenever our mood are sad or we are not feeling good, we if we listen a beautiful song with a pleasant and soothing music, our mood automatically lift us.

✓ Whenever our mood is sad or we are not feeling good, if we listen to a beautiful song with pleasant and soothing music, our mood automatically lifts.

The noun 'mood' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. The phrase 'we if we listen' is incorrect; 'if we listen' is correct. The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Music' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The verb 'lift' should be 'lifts' to agree with singular subject 'mood'.

× So I do believe that singing.

✓ So I do believe in singing.

The sentence is incomplete; 'believe that singing' is not a complete thought. The correct expression is 'believe in singing' to express belief in the activity.