Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt cảm xúc khi hát. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và ý không rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happy after a long day. It is a great way to express my emotions and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am worried about my accent, and I don't want to spend money on classes that might not help me.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý muốn hát cho ai và lý do. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents and friends because I feel shy singing in front of others, but I hope my singing can bring them happiness.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời với ý tưởng rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. For example, singing a birthday song is an important tradition that brings people together and creates joyful moments.

× I really enjoy singing because it's my talent and I think it's make me feel relaxed and it can reduce my strength and give me happy when I.

✓ I really enjoy singing because it's my talent and I think it makes me feel relaxed and it can reduce my stress and make me happy.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'reduce my strength' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'reduce my stress'. Additionally, 'give me happy' is incorrect; it should be 'make me happy' because 'make' is used to express causing an emotion.

× Now I've never learned how to think before because my accent accent is not really good and I know that, so I don't want to waste money to learn.

✓ I have never learned how to sing before because my accent is not really good and I know that, so I don't want to waste money to learn.

The verb 'think' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'sing' to match the topic. Also, 'Now I've never learned' is awkward; 'I have never learned' is more appropriate. The repetition 'accent accent' is a typo and should be corrected to 'accent'.

× I want to think for my parents, my friend and my people because I really shy when I sing to strength and I only want to bring the happier.

✓ I want to sing for my parents, my friends, and my people because I am really shy when I sing in front of others and I only want to bring happiness.

The verb 'think' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. 'I really shy' is incorrect; it should be 'I am really shy'. 'Sing to strength' is unclear; likely intended 'sing in front of others'. 'Bring the happier' is incorrect; it should be 'bring happiness'.

× Yes, of course. For example, in every birthday, I think it's a really necessary to sing a birthday song to tear up with the people who organize this. And I think a song is very.

✓ Yes, of course. For example, on every birthday, I think it's really necessary to sing a birthday song to share tears with the people who organize it. And I think a song is very important.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; it should be 'on' for specific days like birthdays. 'To tear up with' is awkward; 'to share tears with' or 'to get emotional with' is better. 'Organize this' should be 'organize it'. The last sentence is incomplete; adding 'important' completes the thought.