Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows your passion for singing, but the language is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. Whenever I have free time, I like to sing as it connects me to my inner feelings and brings me peace.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives relevant information but is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I tried to learn singing at a music school when I was a child. However, I had to stop after a few days because I got sick and my studies became very demanding, which was disappointing for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is meaningful but the sentence structure is confusing. Use simpler sentences and linking words to clearly express your ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same idea in different ways.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my parents because they mean a lot to me. After that, I would sing for my soul mate to show my love and dedication to her.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but the language is unclear and some phrases are confusing. Try to use simple and clear expressions, and organize your answer logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and calmness to people. When you sing from your heart, it helps you feel peaceful and can broaden your mind.

× When I get the time I love to sing because it get out of me from the streets and make more connection to the deep inside of me.

✓ When I get the time I love to sing because it gets out of me from the streets and makes more connection to the deep inside of me.

The verbs 'get' and 'make' need to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, for third person singular subjects, verbs usually add an 's' in the present tense. So, 'get' should be 'gets' and 'make' should be 'makes'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× It's very natural and and it's very calmness.

✓ It's very natural and very calm.

The word 'calmness' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'it'. So, 'calmness' should be replaced with the adjective 'calm'. Also, the repeated 'and' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× In my childhood I tried going to the singing school to learn the song but after few days back my sickness and also the study pressure keep out of me from the school singing the age which was very upset for me.

✓ In my childhood, I tried going to singing school to learn songs but after a few days, my sickness and also the study pressure kept me out of the singing school, which was very upsetting for me.

The verb 'keep' should be in past tense 'kept' to match the past context. Also, 'few days back' is better expressed as 'a few days'. The phrase 'keep out of me from the school singing the age' is corrected to 'kept me out of the singing school' for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Upset' should be 'upsetting' to describe the feeling.

× I want to sing a song for my parents obviously after considering the another person it should be my soul mate because it will connect me to deep inside for her to dedicate something or make special for her or to dedicate something for.

✓ I want to sing a song for my parents, obviously. After considering another person, it should be my soul mate because it will connect me deeply to her, to dedicate something or make something special for her.

The phrase 'the another person' is incorrect; 'another person' is correct. The pronoun 'it' is used ambiguously; it should refer clearly to 'singing a song'. The phrase 'connect me to deep inside for her' is awkward; 'connect me deeply to her' is clearer. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Singing brings happiness, calmness and the pureness to the person from the deep inside.

✓ Singing brings happiness, calmness, and purity to a person from deep inside.

The phrase 'the pureness' is incorrect; 'purity' is the correct noun form. Also, 'the person' is too specific; 'a person' is more appropriate here. The phrase 'from the deep inside' is better as 'from deep inside' for natural English usage.

× If you sing and learn a song from your soul, from your core inside, you can get into the upper things and make you make you more broader.

✓ If you sing and learn a song from your soul, from your core inside, you can reach higher things and become broader.

The phrase 'get into the upper things' is unclear; 'reach higher things' is more natural. The repetition 'make you make you more broader' is incorrect and redundant; 'become broader' is correct. Also, 'broader' is comparative and should be used with a comparison; here, 'broader' is acceptable if implied comparison exists, but better to say 'broaden yourself' or 'expand yourself' for clarity.