Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more natural and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like singing, and give a specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel bored. For instance, I often sing songs I have learned from others or even compose my own. This activity brings me relief and joy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has many repetitions. Try to give a full and clear response. Use linking words to explain your method of learning singing. Also, avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I usually learn by listening to musicians and repeating their songs. This way, I improve my singing skills gradually.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but has some unclear parts and minor errors. Try to be more precise and avoid unnecessary words. Use linking words to explain your reason for singing for your sister.

Ví dụ: I usually sing for my younger sister, especially when she is crying. I sing lullabies to comfort her and help her feel better.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating the same phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone feels sad or stressed, singing can comfort them and lift their spirits.

× So it relief because it's relief.

✓ So it relieves because it's relief.

The verb 'relief' is incorrectly used here; the correct present participle form is 'relieves' to indicate the action of making something better.

× So the reason why the major reason why I usually.

✓ So the major reason why I usually do this is because it helps me feel better.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object, making it a sentence fragment. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I never learn about singing, but what I always do is to I listen to a musician.

✓ I have never learned about singing, but what I always do is listen to a musician.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' with the present perfect tense 'have never learned' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. Also, 'to I listen' is incorrect; it should be 'listen'.

× So I will now be repeating it as he is singing it.

✓ So I will now repeat it as he sings it.

Using 'will now be repeating' is unnecessarily complex; simple future 'will repeat' fits better. Also, 'he is singing' can be simplified to 'he sings' for habitual action.

× So with that that that thing I will be able to.

✓ So with that, I will be able to learn.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a clear object and verb completes the thought.

× The person I used to sing for is my junior sister, especially when I see her crying.

✓ The person I usually sing for is my younger sister, especially when I see her crying.

'Used to sing for' implies a past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so 'usually sing for' is better. Also, 'junior sister' is not standard English; 'younger sister' is correct.

× So I will be singing for her so that I can use that song as lullaby to PTR to to make her feel OK.

✓ So I will sing for her so that I can use that song as a lullaby to help her feel better.

The sentence has redundant words and unclear parts ('PTR to to'). Correcting these and adding 'a' before 'lullaby' improves clarity.

× Yes, singing is part of things that can bring happiness into world's life.

✓ Yes, singing is part of the things that can bring happiness into the world's life.

'Things' should be preceded by 'the' to specify, and 'world's life' needs 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× Especially when someone is down is tenacious.

✓ Especially when someone is feeling down or tenacious.

The original sentence is confusing; 'down' and 'tenacious' are contradictory. Likely intended to say 'feeling down or tenacious' or 'feeling down and tenacious' depending on meaning.

× So you can use sing to make that person comforts.

✓ So you can use singing to comfort that person.

'Use sing' is incorrect; the gerund 'singing' should be used. Also, 'make that person comforts' is incorrect; 'comfort that person' is correct.

× You can use a scene to comfort someone.

✓ You can use singing to comfort someone.

'Scene' is a wrong word here; it should be 'singing' to match the context.

× You can use a sink to make someone happy.

✓ You can use singing to make someone happy.

'Sink' is a wrong word here; it should be 'singing' to match the context.