Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
I like Seam because it is a great way to make me be confident and at the same time I also like a lot of singer in China such as Jack. That is the baddest thing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a tour where a music teacher taught us basic singing techniques and the briefing exercise. This experience helped me improve my vocal culture and confidence in singing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better. Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Sing with others, some relax. Music can make other peoples feel relaxed or happy.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免使用错误的词汇和句子结构。可以先直接回答喜欢唱歌的原因,然后举例说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me build confidence. For example, I enjoy listening to famous Chinese singers like Jack, who inspire me to improve my skills.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但部分词汇使用不准确,如“briefing exercise”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇,并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, a music teacher taught us basic singing techniques and warm-up exercises, which helped me improve my vocal skills and confidence.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 你的回答结构清晰,内容具体,表达自然。可以尝试使用更多连接词来增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and appreciate my efforts. Moreover, sharing music with them creates a warm and joyful atmosphere, which motivates me to perform better.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,建议使用完整句子并丰富内容,说明原因和效果。
Ví dụ: Absolutely. I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and express their emotions. Singing with others also creates a sense of community and joy.
× I like Seam because it is a great way to make me be confident and at the same time I also like a lot of singer in China such as Jack.
✓ I like singing because it is a great way to make me confident and at the same time I also like a lot of singers in China such as Jack.
这里'singer'应该用复数形式'singers',因为表示很多歌手。同时,'Seam'应为'singing',表示唱歌。
× That is the baddest thing.
✓ That is the worst thing.
'baddest'是非标准用法,正确的最高级形容词是'worst'。
× This experience helped me improve my vocal culture and confidence in singing.
✓ This experience helped me improve my vocal technique and confidence in singing.
'vocal culture'用词不当,应为'vocal technique'表示声乐技巧。
× Music can make other peoples feel relaxed or happy.
✓ Music can make other people feel relaxed or happy.
'peoples'是复数形式,表示民族或人民,句中应使用'people'表示人们。