Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I like singing uh, because, uh, whenever I got a free time, I just open Spotify or YouTube and listen music and with that I can just sing a song and whenever I go to take up my bath, I just sing aloud in my bathroom. So I just love.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Not really, I never ever learned how to sing a song. I just follow some Bollywood singing stars. Uh my favorite is AR Rahman in male and female. Boys are my fan of Shreya Ghoshal. I just mimic to them in bathroom whenever I take my shower.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Actually my friends and my younger brother was usually sing for me whenever I feel stress and whenever we go to a picnic or while we are studying we are singing together.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely. According to my perspective, singing can bring happiness to people because it can calm our mood and some soothing songs are more important our life. Whenever we are feel depressed or in a stress, we can just listen and feel feel stressed.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about when and why you like singing.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. Whenever I have free time, I listen to music on Spotify or YouTube and sing along. I especially like singing loudly in the bathroom while taking a shower. Singing makes me feel happy and refreshed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about your favorite singers and your practice habits.
Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I enjoy listening to Bollywood singers like A.R. Rahman and Shreya Ghoshal. I often mimic their songs while taking a shower, which helps me practice singing informally.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid confusion by clearly stating who sings for whom.
Ví dụ: I like to sing for my friends and younger brother. We often sing together when we go on picnics or study. Singing helps us relieve stress and enjoy our time together.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically. Be specific about how singing affects emotions and avoid contradictory statements.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it calms our mood. Soothing songs are important in our lives, especially when we feel stressed or depressed. Listening to or singing songs can help us feel better and more relaxed.
× whenever I got a free time
✓ whenever I get free time
The phrase 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article here. The correct form is 'free time' without 'a'. Also, 'got' should be 'get' to match the present tense context.
× listen music
✓ listen to music
The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Therefore, 'listen music' should be corrected to 'listen to music'.
× I just mimic to them in bathroom whenever I take my shower
✓ I just mimic them in the bathroom whenever I take my shower
The verb 'mimic' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'in bathroom' should be 'in the bathroom' because 'bathroom' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the'.
× my friends and my younger brother was usually sing for me
✓ my friends and my younger brother usually sing for me
The subject 'my friends and my younger brother' is plural, so the verb should be 'sing' not 'was sing'. Also, 'was usually sing' is incorrect; 'usually' should come before the verb 'sing'.
× whenever we are feel depressed or in a stress
✓ whenever we feel depressed or stressed
The phrase 'are feel' is incorrect; 'feel' is a stative verb and does not use the auxiliary 'are'. Also, 'in a stress' is incorrect; 'stressed' is the correct adjective form.
× I just mimic to them in bathroom whenever I take my shower
✓ I just mimic them in the bathroom whenever I take my shower
The verb 'mimic' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'in bathroom' should be 'in the bathroom' because 'bathroom' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the'.