Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
I like singing because I think singing can express my emotions and relieve my stress. When I singing, I always feel more confident and more relaxed.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Yes, I took a singing lesson when I was young and once participated in a singing competition.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for my family because I always feel more comfortable and more relaxed singing in front of them and they always listen to me patiently.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Singing can release a chemistry called endorphins, which can make people feel happier, and I think singing together can create a feeling of community and belonging.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因,但语法上有错误,如“when I singing”应为“when I sing”。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致,同时可以用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. When I sing, I feel more confident and relaxed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯,例如使用“and”连接两个经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I took singing lessons when I was young, and I also participated in a singing competition.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富,但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词,建议使用连接词如“because”或“so that”使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because I feel comfortable and relaxed when I sing in front of them, and they always listen patiently.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有逻辑,但“a chemistry called endorphins”表达不够自然,建议改为“a chemical called endorphins”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. It releases a chemical called endorphins that make people feel happier, and singing together creates a sense of community and belonging.
× When I singing, I always feel more confident and more relaxed.
✓ When I am singing, I always feel more confident and more relaxed.
句子中缺少助动词“am”,导致动词形式错误。动词“singing”作为现在分词需要与适当的助动词连用,构成现在进行时。建议在“singing”前加上“am”。