Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and clear my mind after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明学习经历，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

Ví dụ: I had some singing lessons when I was in primary school, but I don't think I learned much from them.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不准确，语法和词汇使用错误。建议明确表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用恰当的词汇。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom because she deserves to be appreciated for everything she does.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达唱歌带来快乐的观点，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Absolutely, singing brings me a lot of happiness, and I also enjoy it when others sing for me.

× Definitely yes seeing seeing always makes me relaxed and move my mind.

✓ Definitely yes, singing always makes me relaxed and moves my mind.

这里的动词应使用动名词形式作为主语，原句中重复了'seeing'且用词错误，应改为'singing'。此外，主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s。

× I think it is a great way to make me relax and maybe I am a sane person.

✓ I think it is a great way to help me relax and maybe I am a sane person.

短语中应使用不定式或动词原形，'make me relax'可以改为'help me relax'更自然。

× Actually not about when I was very young in my AT at my primary school, I had some.

✓ Actually, when I was very young in my primary school, I had some lessons.

原句结构混乱，时态应为过去时，且'AT'不明确，应去掉或改为'lessons'。

× Maybe I learn nothing in this classes.

✓ Maybe I learned nothing in these classes.

'classes'是复数，指示代词应为'these'，动词时态应为过去时'learned'。

× My mom, I think all the mothers are the person who wealthy to be seen.

✓ My mom, I think all mothers are people who are worthy to be seen.

'mothers'复数，谓语和表语应对应复数形式，'person'应改为'people'，'wealthy'用错，应为'worthy'。

× Absolutely umm my most most of my happiness umm is from singing.

✓ Absolutely, most of my happiness comes from singing.

'most most'重复，应改为'most'，主语是单数，谓语动词应为'comes'。

× Not only I seems I sing a song but also others sing something to me.

✓ Not only do I sing songs, but others also sing to me.

'seems'用错，且句子结构不正确，'Not only'引导倒装句，需用助动词'do'，'sing a song'改为复数形式更自然。