Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“make me feel comfortable and confidence and relaxing”应改为“makes me feel comfortable, confident, and relaxed”。此外，句子结构较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意动词单复数一致，使用恰当的形容词，并尝试使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing very much. I usually sing when I'm taking a shower because it makes me feel comfortable, confident, and relaxed. Moreover, I enjoy singing freely without worrying about others' opinions.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，如“about about the the lessons”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I haven't formally learned how to sing, but in my free time, I usually watch videos that teach singing techniques to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中有口语填充词“Umm”“uh”，影响流畅度。表达不够自然，且“in the mirror of mine”用法不当。建议减少口语填充词，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意介词搭配。

Ví dụ: That's an interesting question. I feel most comfortable singing alone, so if I had to choose, I would sing for myself, especially when I look at myself in the mirror.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了词汇错误，如“things”应为“singing”，且句子不完整，缺少结尾。建议注意用词准确，句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when someone has excellent skills, they can perform beautiful songs that help others feel relaxed and joyful.

× It make me feel comfortable and confidence and relaxing.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable, confident, and relaxed.

主语是单数的"It"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"。另外，"confidence"是名词，句中需要形容词形式"confident"，"relaxing"是现在分词，表达感受时应使用形容词"relaxed"。

× I can sing whatever I like without any eyesight from other people.

✓ I can sing whatever I like without any criticism from other people.

"eyesight"意为视力，语境中应表达不受他人批评或目光的干扰，故应使用"criticism"或"judgment"，而非"eyesight"。

× I haven't learned how to sing, but when I in my free time I usually see the video about about the the lessons to learn how to improve my singing skills.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing, but in my free time I usually watch videos about lessons to learn how to improve my singing skills.

"see"在此处应改为"watch"，表示观看视频；"when I in my free time"结构不完整，应改为"in my free time"。此外，重复的"about the the"应删除。

× Umm, for me it is a special question because I uh, feel free when I sing alone.

✓ Umm, for me, it is a special question because I feel free when I sing alone.

句中"uh"为口语填充词，书面语中应去除；"feel free"前不需要逗号，且"for me"后应加逗号以分隔插入语。

× So if you ask me who do I want to sing for, I will choose myself, especially in the mirror of mine.

✓ So if you ask me who I want to sing for, I will choose myself, especially in the mirror.

间接疑问句中语序应为陈述语序，故"who do I want"应改为"who I want"；"in the mirror of mine"表达不自然，简化为"in the mirror"即可。

× Yes, I think things can bring happiness to people because when your skills are excellent, you can produce, you can send a beautiful song to other people which make them relaxing and.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when your skills are excellent, you can produce and send a beautiful song to other people which makes them relaxed.

"things"应具体指代"singing"；"which make"中的"make"应与先行词"song"保持单数一致，改为"makes"；"relaxing"为现在分词，表达感受时应使用形容词"relaxed"。