Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because it has been my passion since childhood. My favorite singer is Atif Aslam, whose songs I listen to regularly. Besides him, I also like other singers who inspire me to improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your learning experience.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I have learned some basics by watching tutorials on YouTube, which offer many helpful videos about singing techniques and musical instruments.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Please give a clear and concise response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to explain when and for whom you sing, and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my family and friends, especially during special occasions such as birthdays and family gatherings. Singing for them brings me joy and strengthens our bonds.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why singing brings happiness. Also, correct grammar mistakes and improve vocabulary usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps improve mood and soothes the soul. Moreover, singing allows individuals to express their emotions, which can be very therapeutic.

× Many of his songs are in my favorite list.

✓ Many of his songs are in my favorite list.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× There are also other singers that I like to listen.

✓ There are also other singers that I like to listen to.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.

× For example is also a very good singer and I like singing because it is my interest for my childhood.

✓ For example, he is also a very good singer, and I have liked singing since my childhood because it is my interest.

The sentence lacks a subject after 'For example' and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'he' clarifies the subject, and rephrasing improves clarity and tense consistency.

× No, I don't really want someone to learn about singing.

✓ No, I don't really want to learn about singing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'someone' where the speaker likely means themselves. The modal verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive verb 'to learn'.

× On the YouTube video you can learn about singing and much about instruments.

✓ On YouTube videos, you can learn about singing and much about instruments.

'YouTube' is a proper noun and does not require 'the'. Also, 'video' should be plural to generalize the statement.

× I want to sing to for my family and for my friends and I also do occasionally at some occasions like for some special opinions like families and something like that.

✓ I want to sing for my family and my friends, and I also sing occasionally at some occasions like special family events and similar gatherings.

The phrase 'sing to for' is incorrect; 'sing for' is correct. 'Opinions' is incorrect in context; 'occasions' or 'events' fits better. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I think singing has the potential to bring happiness in individual's life because it act as a mood changing and it can also be considerable for good, considerable for your soul and I think it can do that.

✓ Yes, I think singing has the potential to bring happiness in an individual's life because it acts as a mood changer and can also be beneficial for the soul, and I think it can do that.

The verb 'act' should be 'acts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Mood changing' is better expressed as 'mood changer'. 'Considerable for good' is incorrect; 'beneficial for the soul' is clearer and grammatically correct.